well said

Look n' see..rhyme for me = a G' that wouldn't be tied to the game's restraints,..that replaced complaints with blanket debates or erased fates; and disgrace all hope of embracing true feeling, by wheeling and dealing without ever peeling the layers of a player.

[(Now look here you hater)..recognize an equator satyr i'm to deep to get with dat' backfire or encourage a grater, you may evolve later if you can leap that wide crater.)

So retire, if you desire, or inquire as to the real quill. But once you cross a boss the loss will fuel the fire. So the lead shed on a mishappen bedspread..calming the demon within' and fulfilling the urge to win. But it didn't last for the vast world, alas..was agast and ensured the demise of any fakes in disguise as a champ.

So i revamp, and permanently encamp,..a tramp..i know how to survive, even thrive with a beehive that doesn't conive. For "method" taught me to introspect and reject absolutes..cuz' we troops are smooth with quiet appearance; adherence only to skills that fill the bill. No unnecessary movements, only groove, behoove good sense,..so one need not lament or vent.

SO IT'S WRITTEN,..SO IT'S SENT

something old with something new
all mine though..thanks and a4leafclover2u2

feelin' it..4leaf

true..vivid..good..4leaf

another brother..well dun..4leaf

heart..
4leaf

tnx..for the instant recall
4leaf

Tired of lonely life on the streets..
a box for a sheet, ankles for a seat..
No cares,..bus fares,..quiet
disdainful stares.
god help me make some sense of it all?!
Restless nights full of fevered prayers,
believe you me, he awnsers the call!

One knows not, for all seem right,
just a brief recess from life's lonely plight.
A minute of thirtlessness for all the years,
spent in the toilet living through fears.
How unexpectedly it turns the head,
from "Better off dead",
to Who made the bed?

Well, the awnser is clearer,
day..by struggling day..
nearer to the bearer
along growths trodden way.

a4leafclover2u2

tnx Ghost

A look into the past inspires,
bringing a brimming of true joy.
Remembering reaches up, a spire..
now a man but still your boy.

Times shared over a cigarette..yet
a hard-headed punk, I followed no lead.
You tried to guide me, on this i'd bet,
"Love My Attitude", was my creed.

Ne'er would I conform to a march,
a rebel by birth, blood, and descent.
Trust me momma', without your starch,
I was, damn surely, one hell-bent.

Don't worry bout' that little boy,
you raised him up just fine.
He never wanted for any toy,
though a sh** at the time.

I have made many mistakes in my life,
though not a single would I undo.
And I'd gladly revisit any strife,
if it meant avoiding the loss of you.

Precious..like diamonds and gold,
without you i'd ave' sold my soul.





Always your loving son..Dimmie Mac

nice 4leaf

Of which are you between,
seems Christ or Caeser King?
Though one didn't meen
to expose a seemless seam.

I read ur' page..and thanx,
for a reply worth the read..
seams are not in angst
if finished where they lead.

4leaf2u

tnx Kc a4

likely but whatll they play out to shape

smooth Ghost

shes every mans dream,
shes gods gift ta earth
women they love er too
thats what u call a womans worth

see i love all the strippers
because they show me la

Yes doll, you are so fine..21 questions and you shall be mine;
(if you awnser, be yourrealself):

Are you lookin' for 20/20 or blink-n-wink?
A banker, or bouncer? Laugh, or quaff?
Wine, or dine? Dawn, or fawn?
Impervious, or nervous? Pro, or glow?
Sweet, or meek? Chill, or thrill?
Peel, or real? A find, or a grind?
Used, or persued? Great, or fate?
Honest, or calmest? Team, or teem?
Lend, or mend? Fiend, or friend?
Understanding, or commanding?
Quaint, or paint?
King, or sing?

I am in the middle of these, except a dime.
If your worth my time reply in rhyme..
so we could find time to shine.
The other eleven are my heaven,..
my match to hatch from the batch of seven.
I settled for less on this quest,
now the rest blessed: a no-stress fest.
Lead..
I dare not proceed..
speed: a flimsy reed indeed!
Compatable, or debateable?

Mac

Ahhh..a retort.. 4leaf

Don't drink..but appreciate the thought.. 4leaf