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titanic
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i agree Titanic is the best romantic movie ever but there are few other romantic. movies which i liked i remember only 2 of them right now they are
Pretty Woman and A Walk In the Park i guess that was the name there are few more too |
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Topic:
Heavenly Memories
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hehe we all are kids at heart hehe a this is dedicated to all of us so please do tell me where i can make changes in the poem
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~ we get both
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well you are an amazing writer and im glad i started posting here in the forums and now i see i was missing out on such good friends and writings and also the opportunity to learn and gain experience really awesome writing you should copyright it :)
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Topic:
Heavenly Memories
Edited by
harsh2019
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Thu 09/13/12 03:48 AM
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My childhood seems just like it was yesterday
When I was free and used to play all day Many memories when I still recall A smile comes over my face Those small fights over petty issues I miss all of them and mostly I miss my childhood as it was The part of my life when I was the most happy There was nothing called sadness in my life That is why I miss my childhood the most Those days of fearlessness and laziness Spending the whole day playing I miss the most Miss my childhood the most Those games played with friends Those jokes shared with friends I miss them a lot and I Miss my childhood the most That climbing on trees, playing with Frisbees Miss my childhood the most Now that I have grown up And see children play and enjoy their childhood Tears comes to my eyes As those days will never come back I miss my childhood the most Please if anyone has any suggestions for alterations please do let us know Copyrights reserved Mingle2 Poetic Society |
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Topic:
Perving your account
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do not hide your emotions
let them flow life is a gamble take a chance and it may surprise you in a way you never know :) |
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Topic:
Untitled
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i dnt know if i can match up with them or will they even agree to teach me but im happy if you all liked what i wrote
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Topic:
Untitled
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its a poem of us all not mine alone its by all us who write and share their poems here so can we make it a joint poem by all of us and make changes as all think best and also name which we all agree upon
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Topic:
Dubai Lesbolicious is Here!
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welcome to the site post in forums to meet amazing friends like i did :)
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Topic:
Untitled
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looks like its not good :(
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Topic:
REVELATION
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short verses but sweet :) look forward to read ur writing again soon :)
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Topic:
I walk alone
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really really appreciate it hope u like the new one i wrote
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Topic:
Untitled
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I sit at the edge of the boat
and look into the distant sky i see nothing but darkness everywhere suddenly i see a ray of hope a beautiful angel in a white gown from the heavens she comes down all i do is to look at her and she shimmered like a million rubies and her hair glittered like a million stars i fell in love with her and so did she with me and at that moment i become enlightened my life at once becomes brightened but as i see her she fades away and in my arms she lay i watched her die in my arms and i couldnt do anything to bring her back i cried all day and night as why i let her die without a fight she was all i had and i let her slip away all her fault was that she loved me she was the biggest blessing god ever gave me Alas she is dead and so am i and just living enough to tell my tale now i rest in peace with my beloved just alive to tell my tale the earth watches us meet and the sky bows down before us to greet hope everyone likes it this is my heart carved out in the form of a poem please help me name it too |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
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thanks sooo much really appreciate the views and let me know where i can improve so ill try and write much better
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
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Faith is nothing but a mere belief
that separates the heavenly from the humans it is a gift which only few recieve it is like a ray of hope in the darkest of times and it is like the light at the end of the tunnel where all hopes die faith rises like a knight on a quest riding to conquer all fears faith is a gift which not everone recieves it is nothing but a belief its a gift of a kind given by god to mankind i hope its at least at par grace ill have to think a lot more to write on |
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
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sorry i fell asleep grace hmm ill start writing now
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Topic:
inspired to love again
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wonderfully expressed feelings :)
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Topic:
~ we get both
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sorry to ask and say but i didnt get the meaning can anyone explain thanks sorry so sorry but i really didnt get the meaning
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Topic:
Web of Weaves
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i didnt hope it wad good hehe well ur word is hmmm faith i hope its easy to write on :)
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Topic:
Romantic Evening
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lovely writing really inspires a lot hope to rrad your writings again soon
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Topic:
~pinch me,please
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it is really really sweet and nice i hope you copyright it too loved reading it waiting to read more of your writings :)
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