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Fri 09/14/12 11:45 AM
i agree Titanic is the best romantic movie ever but there are few other romantic. movies which i liked i remember only 2 of them right now they are
Pretty Woman and
A Walk In the Park i guess that was the name there are few more too

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Thu 09/13/12 06:36 AM
hehe we all are kids at heart hehe a this is dedicated to all of us so please do tell me where i can make changes in the poem

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Thu 09/13/12 04:01 AM
well you are an amazing writer and im glad i started posting here in the forums and now i see i was missing out on such good friends and writings and also the opportunity to learn and gain experience really awesome writing you should copyright it :)

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Thu 09/13/12 03:46 AM
Edited by harsh2019 on Thu 09/13/12 03:48 AM
My childhood seems just like it was yesterday
When I was free and used to play all day
Many memories when I still recall
A smile comes over my face
Those small fights over petty issues
I miss all of them and mostly
I miss my childhood as it was
The part of my life when I was the most happy
There was nothing called sadness in my life
That is why I miss my childhood the most
Those days of fearlessness and laziness
Spending the whole day playing I miss the most
Miss my childhood the most

Those games played with friends
Those jokes shared with friends
I miss them a lot and I
Miss my childhood the most
That climbing on trees, playing with Frisbees
Miss my childhood the most

Now that I have grown up
And see children play and enjoy their childhood
Tears comes to my eyes
As those days will never come back
I miss my childhood the most

Please if anyone has any suggestions for alterations please do let us know
Copyrights reserved Mingle2 Poetic Society

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Wed 09/12/12 10:21 PM
do not hide your emotions
let them flow
life is a gamble take a chance
and it may surprise you
in a way you never know :)

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Wed 09/12/12 07:15 PM
i dnt know if i can match up with them or will they even agree to teach me but im happy if you all liked what i wrote

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Wed 09/12/12 12:04 PM
its a poem of us all not mine alone its by all us who write and share their poems here so can we make it a joint poem by all of us and make changes as all think best and also name which we all agree upon

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Wed 09/12/12 10:15 AM
welcome to the site post in forums to meet amazing friends like i did :)

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Wed 09/12/12 10:08 AM
looks like its not good :(

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Wed 09/12/12 07:25 AM
short verses but sweet :) look forward to read ur writing again soon :)

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Wed 09/12/12 07:19 AM
really really appreciate it hope u like the new one i wrote

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Wed 09/12/12 07:00 AM
I sit at the edge of the boat
and look into the distant sky
i see nothing but darkness everywhere
suddenly i see a ray of hope
a beautiful angel in a white gown
from the heavens she comes down
all i do is to look at her and
she shimmered like a million rubies
and her hair glittered like a million stars
i fell in love with her
and so did she with me and
at that moment i become enlightened
my life at once becomes brightened
but as i see her she fades away
and in my arms she lay
i watched her die in my arms
and i couldnt do anything to bring her back
i cried all day and night
as why i let her die without a fight
she was all i had and i let her slip away
all her fault was that she loved me
she was the biggest blessing god ever gave me
Alas she is dead and so am i
and just living enough to tell my tale
now i rest in peace with my beloved
just alive to tell my tale
the earth watches us meet
and the sky bows down before us to greet

hope everyone likes it this is my heart carved out in the form of a poem

please help me name it too

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Wed 09/12/12 06:33 AM
thanks sooo much really appreciate the views and let me know where i can improve so ill try and write much better

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Tue 09/11/12 10:20 PM
Faith is nothing but a mere belief
that separates the heavenly from the humans
it is a gift which only few recieve
it is like a ray of hope in the
darkest of times and it is like
the light at the end of the tunnel
where all hopes die faith rises
like a knight on a quest riding to
conquer all fears
faith is a gift which not everone recieves
it is nothing but a belief
its a gift of a kind
given by god to mankind

i hope its at least at par grace ill have to think a lot more to write on

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Tue 09/11/12 08:51 PM
sorry i fell asleep grace hmm ill start writing now

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Tue 09/11/12 08:33 PM
wonderfully expressed feelings :)

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Tue 09/11/12 08:29 PM
sorry to ask and say but i didnt get the meaning can anyone explain thanks sorry so sorry but i really didnt get the meaning

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Tue 09/11/12 01:03 PM
i didnt hope it wad good hehe well ur word is hmmm faith i hope its easy to write on :)

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Tue 09/11/12 12:57 PM
lovely writing really inspires a lot hope to rrad your writings again soon

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Tue 09/11/12 12:49 PM
it is really really sweet and nice i hope you copyright it too loved reading it waiting to read more of your writings :)