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Topic: ~pinch me,please
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 09/10/12 05:19 AM
you darken my door and i try to not want more i darken your door and you try to not want more pinch me,please i'm drowning in my own tenderness pinch me,please pinch me,hard not to make me cry to make me surface to make me kick rather than stick like candy on a sweater pinch me,please

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Mon 09/10/12 07:11 AM
I like this one but then again i like all you write "like candy on a sweater " very cool way of putting that

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 09/10/12 07:50 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Mon 09/10/12 09:51 AM
Intriguing write this one

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 09/10/12 09:53 AM Edited by 2KidsMom on Mon 09/10/12 09:53 AM
sexy (((teas..))) I liked it.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 09/10/12 04:03 PM
Shugahbee....happy you like to read my stuff..thankyou tazzops...a fiver!..awesome. poppashroom...tilts her head...wonders how.. 2KidsMom....pleases me you read!

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Tue 09/11/12 12:12 PM
So love your writes tb..

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 09/11/12 12:42 PM
Ainjel...smiling,thankyou!

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Tue 09/11/12 12:49 PM
it is really really sweet and nice i hope you copyright it too loved reading it waiting to read more of your writings :)

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 09/11/12 02:09 PM
harsh....and that's a sweet comment

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