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Topic: REVELATION
flech11 Joined Mon 06/04/12 Posts: 67	Wed 09/12/12 07:23 AM
if love exists than so does hate if i may choose than so does fate the grip that binds the hands that sever the soul that finds the mind that's clever if i am real than so are you if i can feel than love is true the words that last the veils of time the sounds that past entwined in rhyme if only you where always there if only i had chose to care the days that break the bonds of trust the chains that take our hands in lust

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Wed 09/12/12 07:25 AM
short verses but sweet :) look forward to read ur writing again soon :)

SimplicityAtItsBest Joined Mon 09/10/12 Posts: 960	Wed 09/19/12 11:50 AM
Awesome. Simple but to the point.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Thu 09/20/12 12:43 PM
If this is your poetry at this age, I look forward to reading you decades from now. You seem like an old soul. Dont ever stop writing.

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