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Lurking, fast approaching like a bolt of lightening
The light on the side continues to fade The love from within continues to die Darkness still succumbs everything in sight The pain still remains, happiness not found Regrets from a past life remain hiding about The man is unruly, no devotion inside The love continues to die from the every day dry What awaits this time? More tears to come, no sunshine in sight No love on this earth can erase his past No love on this earth will ever be held or last As he wonders how real this can be Destroying everything he comes to see Tiredsome walking, hoping for some love But the man is still trapped by the demons amongst. Marina. |
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Questions
Edited by
lizethmarina
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Sun 09/14/08 12:28 AM
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Has anyone ever wondered about the past life of the one who is loved?
Has anyone ever been tormented by situations, events that marked the life of the one you hold? Does the love existe and will it survive? Does the child inside will make it all all right? Do the things done mean anything to anyone at all? Or are you taken for granted thinking it must be this way? Will you stand and endure the things from the past? Will you just run away and leave it all behind? Does he love me, don't think so for sure Or may it's just me the one that ruins our love for sure. Marina. |
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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Mon 06/30/08 08:09 AM
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Thanks KC, her cries didn't go unnoticed
Thanks Alan (WB) |
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Lost Angel
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Thanks pkh and jimz
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Lost Angel
Edited by
lizethmarina
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Thu 06/05/08 09:29 PM
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Covered by tears, a shadow walks after dusk
Long dark hair of remorse, falls on her back Eyes of dispair, trying to hide the fear Searchin for the love that her heart still holds dear The unconditional love he so long sought Always in front of his eyes, but the doubts were too strong Her heart could no longer take his neglect So she opened her wings and had to fly away Who is this that dwells in the night? It's his lost angel, he couldn't hold tight No sorrow, no fury, just a careless heart He is just an illusion, she thought could be the love of her life Now she is an angel with broken wings Flying the heavens still searching for the love within The long dead warrior has left to the battle fields She hopes he'd wake up in heaven to hold him near Marina. |
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Thanks Jimz
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As the night falls on the fading sun
The light from a love begins to fade So much sorrow lurking in the dark So much dissapointment a heart can take The once bright, clear future for them both Now overshadowed by uncertainty of things that can't be controlled Even thou the love is strong A soul can only cry for so long If it's his destiny to be the destructor of man Then her destiny must be to walk the heavens alone For her love can only hold him for so long For her love, she thought, made him whole and strong So she cries in the night Under a dark starlit sky Letting the tears fall down on earth Letting the sorrow drown with the love she holds in her heart. Marina. |
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An Angel Came to Me
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mirror,
cypoet, AngelLight, |
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An Angel Came to Me
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lizethmarina
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Tue 05/20/08 12:14 PM
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This is a poem that was written for me by the love in my life, he called it "an angel came to me". I recently have been writing about darkness, cold, loneliness and his angel. This all was inspired by the poem he made for me.
When all was dark and I could not see All dark visions came to me Trapped in the dark it was so cold There was no beauty to behold In the dark! I screamed to God. Can you hear me! I am as a child as you can see Suffering is all I know Am I invisible here below In the dark! Look at me and you will see That in my heart is loyalty What I ask is true love Send me help from above Into the dark! Then an angel came to me She showed me love and sanity Beauty and pasion left unbound She put my feet back on the ground She is Marina S.A.B. March 22nd, 2008 ILY SAB Marina. |
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Lost Souls Part II
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Good write... |
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Winter Cold
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Sad but beautiful write... Sad it is, the inevitable separation of lovers by death. |
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Lost Souls Part II
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Unconditional Love
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Unconditional love...
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Lost Souls Part II
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very nice!! Thank you |
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Lost Souls Part II
Edited by
lizethmarina
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Wed 05/07/08 05:04 PM
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Just a lost soul
Walking this path of life No place to call my own As I wander thru the night Feel a thousand eyes on me Lurking, waiting in the dark Shadows is all I see As I wander thru the night The darkness succumbs me No daylight in sight I hear death's calling As I wander thru the night Other lost souls accompany me Tired, silent, walking by my side Carrying the load of living As we wander thru the night We hope for daylight In this eternal dark Our souls consumed with dispair As we wander thru the night Lost souls we are Wandering aimlessly in the dark Being pushed by our inside demons And so we wander eternally thru the night Marina. |
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My Shinning Star
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Such a beautiful write, yes LDR can be very hard and sooner or later one will have to move. But it can work out if both are willing to give it there all. You are so right TxsGal, I recently moved to a different town to be closer to someone with whom I had an LDR with and now we are closer than before and I love him so much. Love always finds a way {{{{Pam}}}} |
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Thanks for reading |
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Lost Souls
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Thanks MsTeddy |
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Winter Cold
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Thanks pkh |
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Winter Cold
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AngelLight |
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