"Numb Again"

I received the news midday...
It killed me...
It felt like time repeating itself...

Dazedly I walked...
Through doors...
Past the lamp post...
Car...

Fractal flashings of life...
Passing by...
Spinning unending...
Motionless...mechanical...

Heartless beatings...lub dub, lub dub, lub dub...
Weakening...
Still beating... thub... thub......thub........
Emptying...

Gone...

Fleeting Time - Faye Wong

Time is fleeting.

In the moment we hastily make an unattainable promise,

Only to wait for someone else to fulfill it...



Time is fleeting.

We have seen too little of the world,

Only liking to watch it with the same indifferent face...

fleet of time trailer

hi Pansy I tried creating a poem. .lol..grrrr..I cant rhyme it so never mind. .

Next to never

I watched him
As he packed his duffle bag
Quietly folding his shirts
I thought of how, why, when...
But the questions never came.
I knew the answers,
But it didn't matter...

He turned to me,
With a wry smile.
I smiled back.

He leaned closer,
The touch of his fingers,
On my arm, tingled through me.
I catch my breath,
Only to be stolen by his hard kiss.

Bodies press closer.
The scent of soap
Mixed with burning
Filtered through the air.

Hands tore through cloth and skin,
As sweat collected in secret parts.

A quivering of lips,
A ragged sigh of wanting,
As legs began to tangle and bodies tumble.

Take me... I cried silently, this may be our last...
He coaxed my body only he knew how,
Gently teasing each spot, each crevice
As I held on to every motion, not wanting it to end...

Each soft kiss, each wet breath, pressing harder
More intent,
Until the need overcame want...

As legs rose to hips,
And hips rose even higher,
A collective moan sliced through the air
Until we settled on a drifting cloud.

Knowing the unknown that lay ahead,
I clung to him just as he rested on me
Sated, still needing...
A need that kept us alive.

doesnt need to rhyme, girl

it just flows...

What is her secret? Three, five, seven, nine, eleven; rhythm and the last word rhymes, with the first word of next line.

I hope, I am right about her secret

but it wouldn't sounds nice..lol..devastating actually. .used to be my expertise. .lol

im an open book

im sure you still have it in you

trying anyway. ..lol..I'll let you judge it..

id love to read it!

iI'll do my best then.lol

beautiful mistake - faye wong



At first I agreed to meet you at the seaside to make a solemn pledge
And yet I went to the wrong place and arrived at a swimming pool
My eyes were filled with the beauty of lakewater-blue
You and I began there
Blue ripples paved the way for memories

You gave me a meteorite that fell from the sky
I always took it for a perfect diamond
I never saw its flaws
I set it into my ring
Ive never found it to be a loss

Let me act impulsively
Reason won'�t be of any help
At least I was happy for a while
I don’t care if he is real and you are false;
Who will be the final destination?
It's a gift to be able to do as I wish

If it doesn't come too early
It comes too late
Beautiful mistakes are often closest to the truth
Even if there's a time for somnolence and a time for consciousness
I wont stand firm; isn'��t that life'��s greatest happiness?

Perhaps this is what they mean
By "��life and death like a drunken dream"��



This must be the meaning of...sweetness...

I think you would make a good hip-hop lyricist

That's very nice of you to think so but it might not be the genre for me

Soft hip-hop or R & B.....maybe you're be the next big thing




just saying.....





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now if you could get it to a producer....
just not the ones I copied, tho... Don't want that kind of trouble on my footstep

"Rehab" part- 12 B

I woke up in a cold sweat, hands shaking, heart pounding... A part of me fell into that abyss -- sweet oblivion of nothingness.

I felt a light touch on my shoulder. Angel was looking at me quizzically.

"How do you feel?"
"I'm fine."
"You're crying."

I touched my face, it was drenched. I shook my head at how vulnerable I allowed myself to be. "I'll be fine."

"We all have demons. I won't let you face yours alone. That's why you need to wake up."

I don't know where those words came from. I looked at the clock, 5:30 pm. I don't even know what happened the last hour. But those words, the way they were said, melted ice.

"In time, you'll understand. Let's meet again tomorrow."

Hehe...okay here goes..

Talking to you brings so much joy to my day
The distance between us makes me want you every day
Its like a dream come true whenever I get to see you daily

The sea that separates us
Wont be a hindrance
For my extreme happiness is what you always want
With that no one can replace you in my heart

You are my smile in the morning
Every time I wake up and see you there
Your voice in my ear is like music playing
Though sometimes you're annoying
Trying to wake me up while sleeping
Of course you know that I am joking

Because you are my dream come true
My everything

Awwwwww...babe... very nice...