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Could you write a poem about the wow factor of size?
My apology in requesting such a humorous consideration. 
How are you doing tonight? |
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Could you write a poem about the wow factor of size? My apology in requesting such a humorous consideration.
How are you doing tonight? Wow factor of size? I'll have to put some thought into it... Not quite sure what you mean... It's good. Midday here. Lunch break |
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Enjoy
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Wed 01/21/15 12:54 AM
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Could you write a poem about the wow factor of size? My apology in requesting such a humorous consideration.
"Wow, it's big..." The first time I saw it, My head was filled with awe. I never knew it could foster Such a feeling so raw. My heart was pounding with excitement, I couldn't help but stare. When I had the chance to ride it, I was caught unaware, How it made me scream throughout, Breathless when it ended. It was a force to be reckoned, Dizzy as I dismounted. I couldn't wait, so eager, To hop on another. That's my very first ride, On a big roller coaster. Consider it humorous enough? 
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Edited by
mowildflower
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Wed 01/21/15 08:30 AM
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"Wow, it's big..."
The first time I saw it, My head was filled with awe. I never knew it could foster Such a feeling so raw. My heart was pounding with excitement, I couldn't help but stare. When I had the chance to ride it, I was caught unaware, How it made me scream throughout, Breathless when it ended. It was a force to be reckoned, Dizzy as I dismounted. I couldn't wait, so eager, To hop on another. That's my very first ride, On a big roller coaster. by Pansytilly Wow, that's a great write, it's awesome! 
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Why not call it PMT's rant room? Specifically for people, with that once a month angry rant?
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Mowildflower - wow, thank you so much
I'm glad you dropped in 
Messi - oh, don't worry, you're more than welcome to come by for your monthly... 
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safe and sound acoustic
I remember tears streaming down your face when I said "I'll never let you go" When all those shadows almost killed your light I remember you said "don't leave me here alone" But all that's dead and gone and passed tonight Just close your eyes The sun is going down You'll be alright No one can hurt you now Come morning light You and I will be safe and sound Don't you dare look out your window Darling everything's on fire The war outside our door keeps raging on Hold on to this lullaby Even when the music's gone Gone |
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Wed 01/21/15 02:13 PM
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my immortal acoustic
I'm so tired of being here Suppressed by all my childish fears And if you have to leave I wish that you would just leave 'Cause your presence still lingers here And it won't leave me alone These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus:] When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears And I held your hand through all of these years But you still have All of me You used to captivate me By your resonating light Now I'm bound by the life you left behind Your face it haunts My once pleasant dreams Your voice it chased away All the sanity in me These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus] I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone But though you're still with me I've been alone all along |
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with a smile original
Lift your head, baby, don't be scared Of the things that could go wrong along the way You'll get by with a smile You can't win at everything but you can try. Baby, you don't have to worry 'Coz there ain't no need to hurry No one ever said that there's an easy way When they're closing all their doors And they don't want you anymore This sounds funny but I'll say it anyway. Girl I'll stay through the bad times Even if I have to fetch you everyday I'll get by if you smile You can never be too happy in this life. In a world where everybody Hates a happy ending story It's a wonder love can make the world go round And don't let it bring you down And turn your face into a frown You'll get along with a little prayer and a song. |
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Could you write a poem about the wow factor of size? My apology in requesting such a humorous consideration.
"Wow, it's big..." The first time I saw it, My head was filled with awe. I never knew it could foster Such a feeling so raw. My heart was pounding with excitement, I couldn't help but stare. When I had the chance to ride it, I was caught unaware, How it made me scream throughout, Breathless when it ended. It was a force to be reckoned, Dizzy as I dismounted. I couldn't wait, so eager, To hop on another. That's my very first ride, On a big roller coaster. Consider it humorous enough?
You did a great writing, funny and direct to the point |
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my immortal acoustic I'm so tired of being here Suppressed by all my childish fears And if you have to leave I wish that you would just leave 'Cause your presence still lingers here And it won't leave me alone These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus:] When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears And I held your hand through all of these years But you still have All of me You used to captivate me By your resonating light Now I'm bound by the life you left behind Your face it haunts My once pleasant dreams Your voice it chased away All the sanity in me These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus] I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone But though you're still with me I've been alone all along 
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Spicy - happy you liked it
Romeo - it is a sad song... |
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my immortal acoustic I'm so tired of being here Suppressed by all my childish fears And if you have to leave I wish that you would just leave 'Cause your presence still lingers here And it won't leave me alone These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus:] When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears And I held your hand through all of these years But you still have All of me You used to captivate me By your resonating light Now I'm bound by the life you left behind Your face it haunts My once pleasant dreams Your voice it chased away All the sanity in me These wounds won't seem to heal This pain is just too real There's just too much that time cannot erase [Chorus] I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone But though you're still with me I've been alone all along
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Spicy - happy you liked it
Romeo - it is a sad song... I believe a few people were waiting for your writing. |
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Wed 01/21/15 05:45 PM
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M3kay - I like it too..
feel free to post some of your own it would be a welcome addition
Spicey - it's not that good but I'll get to it again... I think my heart just needs to recharge itself for the meantime ...
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Edited by
Pansytilly
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Wed 01/21/15 08:58 PM
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"I Hate Everything About You"
Every time we lie awake After every hit we take Every feeling that I get But I haven't missed you yet Every roommate kept awake By every sigh and scream we make All the feelings that I get But I still don't miss you yet Only when I stop to think about it I hate everything about you Why do I love you? I hate everything about you Why do I love you? I hate everything about you Why do I love you? You hate everything about me Why do you love me? I hate You hate I hate You love me I hate everything about you Why do I love you? --- i really hate you right now, everything...--- |
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