the lack of preservation
made me fall into depression
a state of manifestation
brought on by my hesitation
my recourse made my detention
I'm looking for redemption
a place of my creation
due to my frustration
i took the wrong direction
i made the wrong selection
to give all my affection
now i sit in my reflection
and watch my devastation
I'm looking for salvation
this broken heart needs attention
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this is my second poem on this site
it doesn't have a name but maybe ill get some good feedback and name it off of what you guys think
i like honest opinions ill take the good with the bad, any tips or constructive criticism is always welcome.

<3 i really do appreciate your feedback :) i guess ill post more ^.^

so im pretty new to this site. i was interested in finding a nice girl in miami, but i havent found one profile thats been on recently, is there a specific way to look for people near my area thats been online recently?

I'm easy going i like to go out and have fun i plan to start college soon for nursing.
i'm currently trying to work my way through school.
i speak English n Spanish, i prefer English i plan to have kids someday
I'm spontaneous and i try to be romantic
I'm looking for a girl who is easy going a girl who is honest trustworthy someone who can laugh at all the stupid things i do lol

does she understand what goes on in my head?,
or does she sit there and pretend?
when im with her who can i be?
some mystery man or the true me?
when i am who i am will she be kind,
or will she be unlike the truth and blind
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let me know what you honestly think
and.. this is my first post! :)