the lack of preservation
made me fall into depression
a state of manifestation
brought on by my hesitation
my recourse made my detention
I'm looking for redemption
a place of my creation
due to my frustration
i took the wrong direction
i made the wrong selection
to give all my affection
now i sit in my reflection
and watch my devastation
I'm looking for salvation
this broken heart needs attention
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this is my second poem on this site
it doesn't have a name but maybe ill get some good feedback and name it off of what you guys think
i like honest opinions ill take the good with the bad, any tips or constructive criticism is always welcome.

Well done..Maybe call it Intention..

I like the way you contain your message, nice and tight...I would only "clean" it up a bit, maybe remove a few pronouns and conjunctions...I like Ainj's title choice too, it fits..

Nice write....

nice write. Welcome to mingle and the writing forum.