Topic: Blind Truth
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Fri 12/21/12 04:28 AM

does she understand what goes on in my head?,
or does she sit there and pretend?
when im with her who can i be?
some mystery man or the true me?
when i am who i am will she be kind,
or will she be unlike the truth and blind
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let me know what you honestly think
and.. this is my first post! :)


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Fri 12/21/12 04:45 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Fri 12/21/12 05:18 AM
I think this is great..What you wrote goes through everyones head at some time..Well done and Welcome.. waving

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Fri 12/21/12 05:33 AM


does she understand what goes on in my head?,
or does she sit there and pretend?
when im with her who can i be?
some mystery man or the true me?
when i am who i am will she be kind,
or will she be unlike the truth and blind
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let me know what you honestly think
and.. this is my first post! :)




Each question tells a story of the hardships relationships pose....Nice job, I also welcome you and look forward to more!flowerforyou

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Fri 12/21/12 05:38 AM


does she understand what goes on in my head?,
or does she sit there and pretend?
when im with her who can i be?
some mystery man or the true me?
when i am who i am will she be kind,
or will she be unlike the truth and blind
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let me know what you honestly think
and.. this is my first post! :)




Hello Shade, welcome to the writers forum... and... I like how you question both the motives and actions of this "she", as well as your own... because and... before we try to understand how others relate to us, we have to first understand ourselves and proceed with who we really are for acceptance to be genuine.. enjoyed your write.. flowerforyou

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Sat 12/22/12 09:05 AM
<3 i really do appreciate your feedback :) i guess ill post more ^.^