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Easy to Forget?
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beautifuly written. He didn't deserve you. Thank you |
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Breakup
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Nice ️️ Thank you |
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Breakup
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well said Thank you |
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Easy to Forget?
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Nice poem . Thanks |
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Easy to Forget?
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The very first time I saw you, I felt my dream had come true, You were handsome beyond my dreams, And you had such a nice personality too.. Then the arguments started, The words, the friction, the stress, No matter how hard I tried, For you, My efforts were always less.. If someone asked me, What was the cause? What went wrong? I don't know what to say, I have no idea, Except its beyond my control.. How can I not think, How each time you ghost me, Without looking back, How can you be so cold, Where is the warmth I felt, When we first met? I wait, and wait more for you, But my pain, my heartbreak, Seem to have no effect, So just tell me straight, How can you act as if you have no regret? Am I that easy to forget? |
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Should I?
Edited by
Jasmine
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Mon 09/14/20 02:47 AM
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well written poem, thank you for the good words are you indian woman? Thank you and yes I am Indian woman though not from India. |
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Should I?
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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Should I?
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are you hurting ? i have read 2 or 3 , so was wondering if u had a break up ? Yes & yes..lol |
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Should I?
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And New Zealand is not a long distance? Compared with most other countries,no. |
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Should I?
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Should I make a wish, Upon on a falling star, Or ask the Universe for a gift, Towards the end of this year, Should I take a risk, And ask for you, As my wish, As my gift, Coz I hold you so dear, Should I light a candle, Let it burn bright, And be positive, Our misunderstandings, Will all clear, Should I honestly tell you, How I feel about you, Or let you go, This is my only fear, Its weeks now since our break up, Yet you still on my mind, You the only reason I am waiting, The only reason I am here.. |
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Falling in Love..A curse
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Beautiful poem Jasmine Thanks |
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Falling in Love..A curse
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Nice poem . Thanks |
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Falling in Love..A curse
Edited by
Jasmine
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Thu 09/10/20 10:55 PM
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When we first met, And had a casual chat, I just saw you, As a means to an end, Someone I could benefit, By making a lover or a friend… I faked my feelings, And won your sympathy, For me you were, Just a solution, To my problems, To set me free… Then you ghosted me, That was a surprise, You came back though, With a thousand lies... We reconnected, I thought you had changed, Now a better person, But my motive was same, Yet love slowly crept in my life, Spreading fragrance, Just like my name.. But it was a payback, And now I have a heartbreak, I have to contend, Who to blame? Who to defend, I guess its only fair, That Karma got both of us in the end.. |
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My Dream
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Very nice one Are you a writer? Thank you and I write poems as a hobby |
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My Dream
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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My Dream
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Lovely! Thank you |
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My Dream
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My eyes dream of you each night,
My dreams come true each night, I wish I could dream on and never wake up, And if I wake up, I wish to find you smiling by my side... You are the only one in my sight, You are the only one on my mind, With the darkness all around, You are the only one, Who brings me peace and light, As I fell asleep last night, You were the last thing on my mind, But I am awake now, And where are you? I had wished to find you, Smiling by my side.. |
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Hear my Silence
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Very beautiful Thank you |
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Love will find a way..
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A lovely poem Thank you |
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Love will find a way..
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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