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If someone asks
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If someone asks,
How I am doing, I will smile and lie, That I am fine, Can't tell anyone, You are the only thing, Nowadays on my mind.. If someone asks, What is so special about you, What I see in you, I will say, You are like a mirror, Each time I look, I see myself in you, If someone asks, Why do I like you so much, You are rude, boring, And no fun, I will say, Maybe that's true, But my heart feels, You are still the one.. |
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Once again...
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I love is this Thank you |
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Once again...
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Walk with me on the beach, Dance with me in the rain, Say that you want me, Come let's fall in love again.. Look deep into my eyes, See your picture in my heart's frame, Say that you need me, Come let's fall in love again.. Whether its days, weeks or months, My feelings will remain the same, you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear, So come lets fall in love again, Maybe its time now, To forget the past, To let go of pain, Maybe its meant to be, So come lets fall in love again ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-) And it is beautiful Thank you |
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Once again...
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Happy New Year!!!!!! Happy Near Year to you too |
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Once again...
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️. very nice Thanks |
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Once again...
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very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain. Thank you and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over. Fixed it for you Thank you so much |
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Once again...
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very nice poem. You might want to edit that line that that says: To get go of pain. I think you wanted to say: To Let go of pain. Thank you and yes that's correct. Its a typo but unfortunately the time to edit is over. |
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Once again...
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You have a lovely way with words. I enjoyed reading this very much Thank you and glad you liked it |
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Once again...
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ONCE AGIAN , You proved that you are born with a Silver Spoon !!!!!!! No, I wasn't lol but thank you |
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Once again...
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Nice poem . Thank you |
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Once again...
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nice Thank you |
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Once again...
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Walk with me on the beach,
Dance with me in the rain, Say that you want me, Come let's fall in love again.. Look deep into my eyes, See your picture in my heart's frame, Say that you need me, Come let's fall in love again.. Whether its days, weeks or months, My feelings will remain the same, you have nothing to lose, nothing to fear, So come lets fall in love again, Maybe its time now, To forget the past, To let go of pain, Maybe its meant to be, So come lets fall in love again ps this is the very first poem I wrote and posted on this forum :-) |
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Should I?
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Should I make a wish, Upon on a falling star, Or ask the Universe for a gift, As Christmas is near? Should I take a risk, And ask for you, As my wish, As my gift, Coz I hold you so dear? Should I light a candle, Let it burn bright, And be positive, Our misunderstandings, Will all clear, Should I honestly tell you, How I feel about you, Or let you go, This is my only fear, Its months now since our break up, Yet you are still on my mind, You the only reason I am waiting, The only reason I am here.. ps this is a reposting of my old poem. Thot to repost it as its Christmas soon :-) i see it as sad....its always sad to miss now, and be stuck in the past.. Its sad but hopeful and sometimes wishes do come true |
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Should I?
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Nice thoughts Thank you |
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Should I?
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Nice poem . Thanks |
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Should I?
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Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star, Or ask the Universe for a gift, As Christmas is near? Should I take a risk, And ask for you, As my wish, As my gift, Coz I hold you so dear? Should I light a candle, Let it burn bright, And be positive, Our misunderstandings, Will all clear, Should I honestly tell you, How I feel about you, Or let you go, This is my only fear, Its months now since our break up, Yet you are still on my mind, You the only reason I am waiting, The only reason I am here.. ps this is a reposting of my old poem. Thot to repost it as its Christmas soon :-) |
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My heart says...
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nice writes lots of feelings came out ... Thank you |
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My heart says...
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Hear from you soon..
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She might have Oceans of Emotions that Hit waves inside her every time she writes. .She will stand all of that. She might cry all night but she will wake up with a Smile the very next day to give out the Best in Her..!!! |
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Hear from you soon..
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She might have Oceans of Emotions that Hit waves inside her every time she writes. .She will stand all of that. She might cry all night but she will wake up with a Smile the very next day to give out the Best in Her..!!! Nice |
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