Well said Knox and I agree with you.

Joe Montana in his prime would have been average if placed on the early Buccaneers squads. It's not about 1 guy in football. You don't have the supporting staff it doesn't matter how good you are.

is mommmy of 1....bigfoot

Nice work JB......really good stuff

Thank you Cowboys!

You have done a Viqueen hater a great favor today.

She's intrigued by your sword....

What flavor she is today?

Thank you all. It' really is nice to see that you enjoy my attempts at writing.

welcome aboard Lonny....

The Bridge



across a span of longing miles
a wanting woman waits
for someone to build a bridge
to span the empty space

each day comes and closes
with a wish and wiating kiss
waiting fot the building bridge
to span the yawning gap

to bring together him and her
and link the longing miles
allowing them to end the day
entwined in each others arms

Sometimes it's not Opportunity That Knocks



there came a knock upon my door
and i'll regret forever more
the opening of my front door
there he stood all draped in black
one skeletal hand grasped the shaft
the other beckoning me to his side
from the darkness of his hood
rasped a voice dry as wood
"your time is done, come with me
this mortal plane you'll know no more"
i turned to run, but he was quick
one swift touch from his scythe
laid me low and there i died
now here I lie composing my last prose
in my new home six feet below

Hallows Eve




the night is chill and windy
rattling the leaves
ghosts and goblins roam the streets
awake on hallows eve
cackling witches stir thier pots
deadly spells they weave
fires arise from jack's hollow eyes
casting shadows on the scene
imps of hell go door to door
collecting satan's fee
one more year the tributes paid
til next hallows eve

Awwwwww....Thank you. You two are to kind.

Dang Mom that was good. Liked it very much. Keep up the good writes.

Just gave you a nudge Hun. Glad i could help though.

Good stuff

Nice work Poetic...

Sorry OL i used all the straws. Had quite the spitball fight earlier.
If you don't mind a little slobber I could get you one.

Cyril

Yeah do the Pack a favor and beat the bears.....you may be able to......i hope

I'l take a gallon of JD and you can just run an IV for it. Just make sure you hit a vein on the first try.