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Topic: §\|tⁿ☻ FSH, hit me
Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Tue 03/11/08 08:54 PM Edited by Sitngrin on Tue 03/11/08 08:59 PM
1. I'd rather kiss you than hit you NEXT

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Tue 03/11/08 08:56 PM
LMAO, is that the subject you want me to write about? yep i dare ya

PINKYBLUISH Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 1536	Wed 03/12/08 12:12 AM Edited by PINKYBLUISH on Wed 03/12/08 12:15 AM
Ok here's a challenge for ya...single mom or teenagers, you choose lol Being a single Mom I never dreamed that I would be raising you all alone But I l will be the best parent I can, and I will raise you until you are grown Bomb threats, kids taking guns to school, violence is all abound I chose to home school you for your safety, some days I feel so confound At times I want to sit in the corner and cry from all of the pressure Even during those times, my children are still my treasure To say it has been an easy process would make me into a liar But I know with me at your sides, you will be taken much higher Though frustration mounts, and sometimes I want to pull out my hair You will always know in your heart, that Mom will always be there © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. u made me cry w this one hon...this one is so true...cuz it is hard..really hard work.but happy and it comes w a lot of smiles and precious little moments that keeps me going and going

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 09:32 AM
u made me cry w this one hon...this one is so true...cuz it is hard..really hard work.but happy and it comes w a lot of smiles and precious little moments that keeps me going and going Awwww, thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! P.S. I still need 4 more challenges. Can no one think of a sentence or phrase for me to write about? Den

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 03/12/08 10:13 AM
suicidal squirrels Suicidal Squirrels For generations up generations we held this land, this territory Now man is cutting down our homes, to build buildings with multistory We had a meeting, our food is nearly gone, tell me what reason is there to go on? Now as we hear the loud noises that so quickly cut down our homes We refuse to keep running further and further away, we're too tired to roam And now we choose to take our own lives, before we allow man to drive us away Keep cutting down our homes, ecologically, it won't be long before YOU pay © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. That was good Hehe, not to be cocky, but for the subject, I think I pulled that one off pretty well lol "Not to be cocky" pffft be cocky you did do a most excellent job with that one........

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 10:38 AM
Hehe, you always offer great words of encouragement! ty ty ty ty ty P.S. I have added all my poems to http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/92167 Some I've submitted on JSH, some I haven't

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Wed 03/12/08 10:46 AM
awww sweetie you know i can think of plenty for ya but will let others add too hope u enjoyed my link i just sent ya

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 03/12/08 10:48 AM
Oh all right Den, here ya go "Finding the feminine side for balance of the soul"

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 10:51 AM
k, that's #2 ~D

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 10:53 AM
LOL, ok Shadow gets #1. Hit me rahter kiss ya then hit ya Hit me or Kiss me? We had a bad day, so many disagreements and shouting I went for very long walk to give us both some space I slowly opened the door, my heart was still doubting I expected with all the words we said, you'd slap me in the face I saw the tears in your eyes and asked if you wanted to hit me You wrapped your arms around my neck, and said you'd much rather kiss me © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Wed 03/12/08 10:55 AM
LOL, ok Shadow gets #1. Hit me rahter kiss ya then hit ya Hit me or Kiss me? We had a bad day, so many disagreements and shouting I went for very long walk to give us both some space I slowly opened the door, my heart was still doubting I expected with all the words we said, you'd slap me in the face I saw the tears in your eyes and asked if you wanted to hit me You wrapped your arms around my neck, and said you'd much rather kiss me © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author. awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ya making me blush again

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 10:56 AM
It was YOUR request Hope you liked it! ~Den

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Wed 03/12/08 10:57 AM
It was YOUR request Hope you liked it! ~Den Of course I did

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 12:30 PM
Oh all right Den, here ya go "Finding the feminine side for balance of the soul" Hope you enjoy! Finding the feminine side for balance of the soul We start our life as pure energy, but still we are a soul Before our birth metamorphoses our soul to the physical We have no gender, until at last we are born and made whole Then once we are established within the anatomical Our gender is formed, but as we grow older, we begin to see That understanding the opposite sex is truly the key A man must find his feminine side, to truly understand and agree Once the testosterone is overlooked and we truly look inside Then we are able to understand her needs, her desires That sometimes she just wishes to be heard, not to have a problem fixed When we have established that, our souls can truly bind And we will understand each other for the remainder of our time © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 03/12/08 12:33 PM
Grudgingly? Nope. Happily drops a curtsy to your talent, very well done!!!!

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 12:44 PM
I'm very happy you liked it! ~Den

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Wed 03/12/08 12:48 PM
aww that another good one there, ya gotta love the way he writes he a sweetie

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 01:58 PM
aww that another good one there, ya gotta love the way he writes he a sweetie Awwww, thank you hon

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Wed 03/12/08 08:41 PM Edited by Sitngrin on Wed 03/12/08 08:45 PM
Your Mistake I saw your cute picture, your red hair and your blue eyes I spent three hours of time talking to you, enjoying your voice You deserve an academy award for your performance that night I thought the next day, after the way we’d talked, we’d have no choice But to make contact as early as possible, thinking you liked me as I did you Turns out you decided to be dumb and blow off the best of the brew Don’t think for a second that letting go of you caused me any pain Hell, truth be told, you’d probably do little more than complain I offered to be there for you for your insecurities and pain of the past You decided against having me in your corner, a mistake that will last and last I KNOW what value I have, I know that I am a great person with so many qualities I hope you enjoy your hole you live in, I tried to help you out; someday you’ll see And then you’ll realize in the end what it is you threw away like yesterday’s trash You’ll be wishing you had a nice guy like me when you hit the ground and crash You’ll eventually find that you had a diamond surrounded by a pile of rocks But hey when you finally realize what a damn fool you were, you can just…….well you know the rest © Copyright 2008 Den Wedding. All Rights Reserved by Author.

shadow77 Joined Sun 02/17/08 Posts: 23707	Wed 03/12/08 08:43 PM
Another good one there Den