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Don't know what you would be looking for hopefully the same as me if interested send me a text
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It's a pretty good profile, with several nice photos and nearly everything filled out. But many of the photos are shadowy, and the text blurb is messy.
Maybe take a minute and clean up the text blurb, using punctuation. The text you have has none. But I like that you described what you're looking for and a little about what you seek. I like the 2nd photo the best--shows a nice smile and your eyes. The other selfies, where you're grimacing to the camera don't help much. Maybe the one outside, in the motorcycle helmet suggesting you're a biker is good. Overall, it's a good profile and your photos show you're probably a good-looking guy, so you'll probably do alright. But for the profile with a sloppy blurb and photos hiding a bad haircut, I'd only rate it 7/10. Good luck! |
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Edited by
SparklingCrystal 💖💎
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Sun 03/09/25 04:24 AM
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Use punctuation.
Now it's a bunch of words without even a single period. "After all these years..." what years? You're referring to something that isn't clear to the reader. Maybe not necessary to elaborate, but maybe it is. Depends on what was going on in 'these years'. Make up your mind as to what you want. You've got all the options checked, from sex to relationship. I personally will never get talking nor involved with a man who's open to anything & everything. If you just want sex & casual, be clear about that. If you want a real relationship be clear about that. Or make clear you don't give a toss as long as it's something. Get a photo without a hat on and use that as a profile photo. This one doesn't do much for you with that shadow on your face. I was surprised to see your age as the photo makes you look much older, prolly because of that shadow. |
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