Topic: Profile Criticism In Demand.
Hademar's photo
Sat 06/15/24 02:49 PM
Hello everyone. I hope my profile does the trick.

Please don't be shy to be as critical as you wish. Criticism is important, after all.

no photo
Sat 06/15/24 03:06 PM
Hmmm. I'm thinking that you have a full life. You are looking for someone for an hour or two a day to spend time with..

Mortman's photo
Sun 06/16/24 02:52 PM
Edited by Mortman on Sun 06/16/24 02:54 PM
It's a good profile. You seem to have completed all the parts except for the relationship status. Having read the blurb, I agree with the point above. Like you have no time, and are looking for a mate because getting a dog would be cruel. Seriously, just someone to say "good morning" and "good night?" That seems dreadful, but maybe there are women in New Brunswick who are looking for exactly that, or into the challenge of expanding your lifestyle.

Aside from that, you seem like a good-looking guy, and the profile is fairly complete. The photo could be better. Better lit, and maybe looking into the camera lens. This photo looks like it was uploaded from a police body cam ("excuse me sir, your neighbors are complaining about your making breakfast at 4AM). You could do better, and upload photos of yourself out doing things. I do like that you used the Headline section, which most people miss.

So, for the well-done profile, with a photo that could be better, the missing relationship status and a concerning blurb, I'd rate it only 8/10. Overall a pretty good job.

Good luck!