Topic: On my soul you had kissed... | |
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For there were places within me,
that seemed so far away. My spirit wanted to see, then recognized who would stay. Although my heart has been open, and the door left ajar. There were words left unspoken, describing a love from afar. Try and try as I may, to comprehend all of this. Deep inside you had stayed, on my soul you had kissed. An imprint of your thumb, dolphins swim into a ring. Worn now as just one, Leaving my heart to sing. |
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THATS A GREAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!
(IF THIS IS A---777;HERES A POEM FOR YOU...) ALTHOUGH THE PLACES WITHIN YOU SEEMED FAR AWAY, I KNEW THERE WAS MORE TO YOU... EVEN TO THIS DAY. YOUR HEART OPENED AS YOU WERE GENTLY PULLED FROM YOUR DUNGEN, BUT WORDS GO UNSPOKEN ONLY CAUSE YOU ALLOW YOUR WOUNED HEART TO STAY BROKEN. IN YOUR SOUL;IF SHE LAYS DEEP WITHIN TRY AND TRY AGAIN.... TO REACH HER RELEASE HER FROM YOUR DUNGEN. FOR YOU BESTOWED A MARK ON HER TOO BUT NOW, SONGS ARE HER ONLY HOPE TO REACH YOU. IF YOU GIVE HER A CHANCE YOU MAY FIND A TRUE FRIEND OR ROMANCE. |
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Both are awesome
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They certainly are, thanks for sharing |
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YOU ARE BOTH WELCOMED [BRITTY-TXSGAL333]
I ONLY WISH 'CREATIVE SOUL' WOULD LET ME KNOW IF ITS A--------777. |
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A--------777.? What does that mean? |
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very nice write
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Edited by
Jess642
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Sun 12/23/07 06:03 AM
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Michael, thankyou for sharing that which comes up in you.
I know her heart, her soul is the same. ( But please, this is getting torturous, in the nicest possible way, Bring On The Daffodils, you two ) |
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A--------777.? What does that mean? ITS ONLY PART OF HIS SCREEN NAME HERE. THE STAFF TOLD ME I CANT USE A PERSONS FULL NAME HERE. I RESPECT THAT CAUSE I WOULD'NT WANT SOMEONE TO POST MY NAME EITHER. |
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Michael, thankyou for sharing that which comes up in you. I know her heart, her soul is the same. ( But please, this is getting torturous, in the nicest possible way, Bring On The Daffodils, you two ) OH JESS642,THAT ALMOST BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES! BUT,HE THINKS I'M A MAN ACTING LIKE A WOMEN. I SURE DO MISS A.777 THOUGH. I EVEN SUGGESTED 'FRIENDS' BUT,HE WONT REPLY. SAD......BUT TRUE. |
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great words both of you
thank you tiff |
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Bring on the Daffodils...
Ah Lee... It is good to see you again, young lady... Everyone: Thank you all... |
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YOU ALL HAD GREAT REPLIES. BUT,I JUST DONT THINK THIS
IS A777;CAUSE HE WOULD'VE REPLIED BY NOW. OR MAYBE IT IS...........HE HAS'NT REPLIED TO MY E-MAILS,SONGS, MESSAGES,OR ANYTHING. BUT,THEN AGAIN...I LOOKED AT 'CREATIVE SOUL' PROFILE. HE DOES'NT MATCH A777. EITHER WAY,I'D LIKE TO KNOW IF ITS A777. |
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Edited by
ArtGurl
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Sun 12/23/07 10:11 AM
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My dear Michael....I so love you ... so so love you ...
...overflowing (((Jess))) I hear you sister ... we are eagerly awaiting the daffodils |
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Michael, thankyou for sharing that which comes up in you. I know her heart, her soul is the same. ( But please, this is getting torturous, in the nicest possible way, Bring On The Daffodils, you two ) OH JESS642,THAT ALMOST BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES! BUT,HE THINKS I'M A MAN ACTING LIKE A WOMEN. I SURE DO MISS A.777 THOUGH. I EVEN SUGGESTED 'FRIENDS' BUT,HE WONT REPLY. SAD......BUT TRUE. Jess is referring to me Enya. I wish you well in your search for A777 |
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((((( Sherrie & Michael ))))))
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