My heart's on fire! My soul aflame!
Putting even the greatest loves to shame!
Yes, my love, I will accept your part,
And to you, I too, shall give my heart,
I shant forget how frail you be,
This gesture from you instills trust in me,
I, too, require a boon of thee,
Keep my heart safe, here is its key....


Mac

Dedicated to Ice

this key from you I do accept
It's lock I do hold dear
for the lock is of us both my love
two halves that now be one
to be forever united
to beat in unison
i look into your eyes
i see my future true
what once was unknown to me
a stranger by my stream
is now the one I've always dreamed
no more do i need to seek
for you i have found
my faceless stranger no more you'll be


4 mac

I see

i only hope you truly see
see of you
see of me
I cherish what is truly we
the path you helped me find
the poems you helped me write
for in a shell I always was
a prison made of ice
for frozen always my heart did feel
you helped realize that I could feel
that love was there for me
Sorry I truly am that mine for thee was not to be
In ways i can never say
to you grateful I shall be
my dreams with yours forever entwined
my kitty and thee

for m

You'll dream no more of faceless me,
For now no secret is kept from thee,
And now posted for all to see,
Is my choice of woman to hold my key,
And should you tremble, should you fall,
Look to me to ease it all,
For now my task is set in stone,
You will never again feel so alone,
I swear to you, to honor this oath,
And happiness shall embrace us both...


Mac

Dedicated to Ice

the oath from you I do accept
to you i make my own
to have to hold to love
this promise i make to you
be there i will
my love i give
to you always
for you are mine
as i belong to thee
your princess in ice no more


4 mac

and my lonely soul does bleed true for you true...M.

the wound that I have opened up
forever sorry i'll be
for if I had known
had ever dreamed
that I would do this to thee
I never would have taken this path
the path of my kitty and me
my heart soars for the love it has shown me
It weeps for what I have done
I'm sorry is all I can say
wait for me by the stream
in dreams I shall surely come
my kitty and i shall thee see

for m

Your ice is cast off by flames of love,
By passion, by truth, by friends above,
In truth, my maiden, it was you, you see,
Who cast your shell off, it was not me,
Yes I aided with words divine,
But your thought were yours, your actions thine,
I brought but a taste of what you desire,
And showed you what my love could aspire,
You melted sweetly and shook your frost,
You know that I bring something you've lost,
With all my heart, I say so true,
I am ready to be loved by you...


Mac

Dedicated to Ice

And love you I shall
from my icy spire
as I slowly melt from your flame
slowly i slip
ever so slowly falling
I can only look in your eyes
and know i am in love


mac

wtf? is this the contest area or the mac n ice lava lamp love lounge?

jealous we can add you in the mix if u like

With This Ring...

With this ring- I thee wed,
Its more to me baby cant you see-
Than the words we've said
Because the visions in our hearts,
Match the visions in our heads-
My love I pledge...
With this ring.

With this ring I want the world to know-
Thats it's you my dear who sets me all aglow
All the riches in the world won't mean a thing
Without you-
And this ring.

With my heart- I make this vow,
To be as pure and as true to you
As I am right now
With these eyes I will always see
that its the Lord above
Who sent your love to me!

There's no one on this earth
I could love more
And you're the one my heart
Is beating for...

I pledge my love..... With this ring!

Tressia

naw but thanks i was just wondering where the poets are. There were
alot more before I was lookin to read some good poems from more than a
few ppl.

BLACK
Its foreboding stare is all around
A velvet blanket that makes no sound
Covering us as it turns to nite
Wish I knew how to keep away the fright
A pit a void a sense of fear
I cannot see its sharpened spear
Waiting for its dark loneliness to appear
Ending my dreams and smothering the clear................

after 9pm central time.my hopes go out to all poets,
hopes none were false,just true,,,
as mine were from my heart true...

KUDOS TO ALL POETS THIS EVE.......M.

The auditions still take place tomorrow too.
Jim

So now my love it seems you know,
That love exists no matter where you go,
You weren't even looking, you just stumbled accross,
A soul who knew emptiness and loss,
You've eased that pain and along the way,
You've found the cure to your own dismay...

Alright I get to be the villian..you guys write extremely well but this
is an individual competition not a team competition..you should take the
love letter to another thread..This is not an attack this is a
request..i resect your love and your ability to write..just don't let it
cloud your judgement or respect of others..this is not the american love
letter competition..WILL

You're right buddy, it isn't a team competition... so judge them
seperately ;) It was all spur of the moment stuff which is what makes
poetry good. This is not an attack, its a notification ;)