Topic: Broken Dreams | |
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Sifting thru the pieces
of all the broken dreams The future was almost everything it was planned it to be When drastic changes stop your world and pieces start to fall their isn't much that one can do to get thru it all As time goes by you look some pieces are around Do we gather, do we rebuid, or leave them where they're found? Maybe plan a new dream With goals that can be reached in such a way I will succeed my goals cannot be breached This is how I used to think it's harder then it seems to try and build a new plan upon the broken dreams |
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I really like this!
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Shattered pieces dressed in hope
Cloaked in the maybes Of yesterdays and wishes on the wind. Stand a little taller on this mound Closer to the clouds Higher on the hill of today. Pick and choose the pieces of these past dreams, Shine them with the breath of hope. Not broken, merely down upon the ground fertilised in wisdom, Dreaming of tomorrows truths. |
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Enjoyed reading both poems....thanks
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Yes that was very nice. optimism runs high in your life.
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vocalist sent u an email
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The best songs and poems were written from heartache...
Love will find you again, when you aren't looking... |
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I agree on the best songs part. It seems the emotional highs and lows gets me writing quickly. I feel lucky I have that release.
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I love reading other peoples poems they inspire me to write more of my poems. And you really have way with words and your poems were informative inspiring and lovely to read and i enjoy reading them
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Thanks Pinky, I usually just write songs, that was a rare moment for me.
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very nice
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Thank you. I try to write more up beat, it just doesn't work like that.
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