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Standing on the edge of the world
................................her toes touching eternity as sea eagles soar above her head ............................riding the currents of her existance. Wild straw daisies graze her legs ........................waiting patiently for her attentions while her shadow dances in the moonlight ...........................unaware of her reluctance. Pregnant ocean hears her thoughts ............................midwife to the tides of her everchanging emotions .......................the overdue labour of life. The absence of breeze upon her skin ............................expectantly holds it's breath awaiting her decision. Raucous laughter erupts from the bare cliff's path, young drunken lust seeking solace in the gloom. Turning her back on intimate destiny ................for now, her feet embrace the earth once again. |
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I must imput a reply that I feel is needed here.
It is difficult for me to write a "blanket" reply that could cover the range of emotions felt from your writings, so humor was my armor. I apolgize for the comment "Poetic orgasm", but indeed it was. It offered many emotions, made me speechless in awe, feeling confused and breathless, and without words. What does that sound like to you? The piledriver comment....... Your talent brings a cannon to a gun fight, and so many in one place, was like bringing forward a whole regiment. Please forgive my humorous descriptive of you post. It was not the content I was replying to, but the beautiful barrage of your works. |
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Staccatoburstsofwords..... fly........................ forth
........................................tumbling striking ...................bouncing scattered .....across the .....................................page. Do they require straightening conforming...................................to the whims...of discipline? Or free to .........................meander .................as they...want.........anywhere they choose? Defiance..........challenges order and pronounces ...........................................victory. ![]() |
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i stood upon the ridge with snow and alpine flowers
where the surefooted and the reckless go and i think to myself above me is emptiness and below me are waterfalls into deep pools so i hike to a lake where few ever go and rest myself at my rock near the great falls crashing forever, fiercely churning the ledge grinding granite, shearing slate, melting limestone in front of my face i come here because it is where she always cries her freshwater tears condensing on my cheeks in bright sunlight filtered through high branches and tenacious vines i hold the moment close to my naked breast as i close my eyes thinking cry on me sweet river cry on me... |
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Jess
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Tangled sighs Lifted hearts Loose ends One inside the other Twisting just so Wrapping around Eternity one inside the other Tethered tight Pull too hard And it all .............................................comes undone. Slipknots. |
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Tell why love was
staggering through dark slender sounds today. Ask her wants what secrets are growing out from this man. See within her wild tomes the glass page cracked open. |
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Windows
see inside our lives and whispers unseen. |
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Eyes around the edges
drinking in the sounds cooling winds and fiery paths slashed across these grounds. Silent hands upholding secrets deep within jumbled pieces blown about minds baring naked skin. Voices tred so gently silent in their song wander through the valleys deep casting shadows lifetimes long. |
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She left
...............before arriving. He looked ...............before seeing. They woke ...............before sleeping. She loved ...............before living. He took ...............before giving. They parted ...............before meeting. |
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You astound me sister
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Can you recall the hardness of the baked land beneath your feet?
Hardened by the centuries of harshness, brittle from the scorching heat. Can you see the cool depths beneath the surface? Where reflections are so pure, and the waters still, mirrored in perfection. Did you drink from these waters? Long, cool, sweet draughts of history. And were you quenched? Are they your footprints in the mud? Or someone elses? Did I only dream you ? |
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Your song continues; traveling through currents of emotions.....traveling at the speed of sound, I feel you.....
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You always amaze me Jess
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This bed, it is island
buffered by life's storms. This bed, it is oasis from thirsting memories. This bed, it holds the stories of laughter, tears and hope. This bed, it holds the safety from fears and dark terrors. This bed, it is torture chamber of night's long lost and gone. This bed, it knows the secrets whispered in the dark. This bed, was once sanctuary from all that grazed the soul. This bed is history.... ....in the making. |
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this bed is the home of dreams
EXQUISITE dreams |
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I still you see you
in the darkened doorway the people on the street the folded towel next to me the sand beneath my feet the wrinkles of my pillow. I still hear you in the roar of the surf the whisper of the wind the howl of the dog the clink of a glass the silences of early dawn I still smell you in the morning coffee at my hand the soap upon my body the ozone of summer storms the cooking of pancakes in the crevasses ofmy soul I still feel you. |
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She keeps her secrets in the folds of the cloth
..............that she weaves in sunshine. Simple cloth to all that purchase her dreams ..............woven from a loom of life. He wears her secrets in the pockets of his shirt ..............sewn by her hands of time. Gentle hands that tire of long waiting ..............restless in their patience. The fabric of love is but a fragile veil ..............worn by flushed young brides. Tossed aside in darkened hours of sweet embrace ..............laid crumpled on the floor. She keeps her secrets in the folds of the cloth. |
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She's impatient tonight
Stomps her feet Gnashes her teeth Shakes her fists A hush across the sky. Flashing eyes Roaring voice Unleashes her fury Warm earth opens to her As she cries her tears Of heated frustration. Spring storms. |
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