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It's the season to be awesome so help a good guy out and gain some karma or maybe even a friend in return :)
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One of the best I've seen on here. The only change I'd make is either the second to the last, or the last photo as your main. Otherwise, it's really good. Good luck to you.
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The text itself is okay. But it doesn't make for an easy read as punctuation is lacking and it has a blank line between every sentence.
As for pictures; what Paintecards says. Welcome to Mingle and good luck!
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Edited by
soufiehere
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Fri 12/27/13 03:38 PM
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Very nice, can't complain :-)
(You note you are 'not a subscriber' when in fact, you are, it is all free :-) |
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Thank you very much for the helpful tips i appreciate everyone's help. I am very much aware of my horrible grammar i do try to structure it the best i can though.
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