Topic: The Luxury of Decline | |
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set me free let me go I don’t need you anymore I can fall apart all on my own constitutional compromise meets perfumed flavored alibis on the corner of I’ve been through this ****- before where all the wounds I healed you’ve opened every time I bleed you numb and all the words are left unspoken `cause every time I reach you’re gone condescending little lies tore the mountain from its rise so long to build such a swift decline dredging through the brevity grain of sand in an open sea I’d swallow, but I can- hardly breathe all the life I once possessed sheathed by the acquiesce we were on our way and now I find… that all the wounds I healed you’ve opened every time I bleed you numb all the promises prove token-ed `cause every time I reach you’re gone set me free let me go I don’t need you anymore I can fall apart all on my own kc '11 |
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This reminded me of times my children tried to pull them selves from my grip. Those moments they tore themselves from me and the final pull toppled me. When it was over, they immediately embraced me and would not let go.
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Nice
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un-manifested, unoccupied, all they own,,,,, twisted tarnished lies.
A very good write man... |
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I am still hearing you talk this one, while I'm reading..As always, a pleasure reading your writes kc..
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This reminded me of times my children tried to pull them selves from my grip. Those moments they tore themselves from me and the final pull toppled me. When it was over, they immediately embraced me and would not let go. this is actually my look at (or answer to) people who seem to jump from destructive relationship to destructive relationship. always ending up in the same relationship, even though the names have changed. we all know them and if we don’t, perhaps we are ‘them'. thank you for gracing the thread... |
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Very nice write K- and I might resemble this from time to time. It certainly hits home for many I'm sure.
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Very nice write
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Nicely done :-)
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p....thank you
mig... soufie... and thank you too |
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Wonderful imagery KC! Love the chorus with the talk of healed wounds. If you're not a already musician you might want to explore the recording and production possibilities in modern computer systems - easy than you might think.
Keep letting that art flow! FantasyArtMan |
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a familiar knowing, i can fall apart all on my own,,,, as always, perfect words!
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kc......
and in the stillness of the echoes i'm still falling apart on my own i like very much teasingbrunette |
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Wonderful imagery KC! Love the chorus with the talk of healed wounds. If you're not a already musician you might want to explore the recording and production possibilities in modern computer systems - easy than you might think. Keep letting that art flow! FantasyArtMan I wish, no musical talent here at all. too bad though, i can here this one in my head *shrugs* thank you for the kind and encouraging words... |
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t-b i think we all have our times when we don’t need much help falling apart, though it might be nice when we pick up the pieces... thank you ladies... |
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