Topic: I AM,,,,,,,,The MAN!!!!!!
lionsbrew's photo
Sat 07/09/11 12:18 PM
Edited by lionsbrew on Sat 07/09/11 12:29 PM
Your spellcheck must be broken
on your own words your choken
tellin stories trying to pass by
look in the mirror at who your callin high
you must've looked through a thesaurus
it didn't really help
your rhymes still just bore us
talking about a life of imprisonment
more like an autobiography
about your achievements
i was a smart criminal
never been busted
not like some snitch who cannot be trusted
try to go off and be fowl
ill make your bones shiver with the sound of my growl
It doesnt take me an hour to write my replies
the words just cum out and drop haters like flies
you should stop trying to act like your hard
your pulling pennies while I pull your card
go back to what you were doing before you met me
go back to your hooker who makes it burn when you pee
go back to that happy place while you can still see
get off my Dick stop riding my coatails
its not my fault your lifes full of fails
So go on try and get down with your bad self
Im iller than cancer and worse for your health
like a neurotoxic venom ill affect your brain
your lungs will stop working and youll feel immense pain
hemotoxic skill that destroy flesh as I talk
Ill erase your existence like a blackboard and chalk.smokin

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Sat 07/09/11 12:52 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Sat 07/09/11 12:53 PM
Poor cute little backstreet boy
Turned into a cyber prostitute
Worked the net trying 2B
Wild N foot loose
Now engulfed by a bad case of STDs
Popping penicillin like aspirin.
Drugstore addict
Mary Poppins fanatic
Burning N itching
Scatchen N sniffing
Googled out...turned out.
Ballin like a chronic hypochondriac.
Looking 4 cures for Chlamydia.
A side order of Gonorrhea.
Herpes in the backside.
Now Syphilis rules ya mind.
He's on the internet
looking like a cracked out
Vanilla Ice.
Oops his girl Charles
is calling once again.
Back 2 Charles throne
his royal lover gottem bent.
Hitting him up like
a wayward congressional
lame duck session.
Dr. warned U not to
remove those stitches....
Get off of ya knees
Ya 2 busy pulling
up Charles pants
while kissing his a$$....smokin

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Sat 07/09/11 01:09 PM
Dude honestly, I'm getting boredsmokin
I'll let you have the last say....drinkerlaugh


lionsbrew's photo
Sat 07/09/11 01:20 PM
Edited by lionsbrew on Sat 07/09/11 01:21 PM
That took you a while
your rhymes seem to be getting worse
your utter lack of style
shows itself in every verse
your starting to just repeat yourself
like a broken old record
from a dusty old shelf
come with something fresh exciting and new
not some leftovers in the pot
or overcooked stew
vanilla ice prince charles is that all you got
it okay toloosen your collar
I know my rhymes are hot
just take it like a man on the chin
instead of an old geezer
whos been kicked in the shin
you misunderstand on hates what i thrive on
unlike someone else whos just a used tampon
bloody bloated dropped down in and flushed
your lyrics are bogus and seem to me rushed
you seem to think your up and gangbanging
but your wearin a skirt and i see your string hanging
maybe some midol would do you some good
until then maybe stay away from the hood
weres your conviction your fire and passion
theres no way to come back your a fad and not fashion
I havent even started to fight
you aint got the tools to compare to my might
ive been there done that and your not even close
its on my words sucker mcs overdose
i own the mic with skill levels unmatched
the micheal phelps of rapping my medals all unscratched
do you need a cookie or maybe a hug
how bout I show you the true meaning of thug
I guess that would likely go over your head
or between your legs like your urine soaked bed
take out like a ninja or thief in the night
bringing your nightmares out into the light
if all you got is more of the same
please dont respond youll only look lame.laugh smokin

i thought it was all in good fun man. No hard feelings.

soufiehere's photo
Sat 07/09/11 01:26 PM
Ooooo a rumble.

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Sat 07/09/11 01:46 PM
:wink: drinker smokin

lionsbrew's photo
Sat 07/09/11 01:47 PM
Thanx for the word game. My brothers and I used to go back and forth for hours like that.drinker smokin laugh

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Sat 07/09/11 03:42 PM
smokin drinker

Thanx for the word game. My brothers and I used to go back and forth for hours like that.drinker smokin laugh
Dat be heavy my Brothers f rap,,now if you want hours,
I'll see if i's got some flowers,
Talked to yo probation man,,tell him you's got thi plan.
If he looks da otter way, you can rap like ME today.
Don't get caught with your pants pulled down,,
hell now days everyone wants to see a clown,,
your pink little panties,,looks pretty skampy.
whas with does brown stains on the back.
here let me give you a jack slap.
so use to do this for hours, im sure!
well I'll give you your cure.
Take a couple enemas, then eats ya some m&ms,
then just let your words STILL STINK LIKE TURDS,
You be so nasty, so all dat,
you need to cover yo face wit yo hat.
Time to put both you boys to shame,
cause i be da MAN dat MADE DIS GAME...
You ain't chitt, w/o trying to be ME,
its in yo words, like FU,,,,,,C.
so don't try and be better dan me,
cause i'l make yo pants all wet with ur PEE.
ya wanna talk chiit,,right here is IT!
metaphorical, ecological, theoretical,
I be up-n-yo faces like, Mr. Ra-DAD-ical.
Put u down, post ur sad pictures up all-over-town.
So wats da matter,,cat ate your tongue,
hell dats that boy in U, yu's to young.
iam4u<-----read my name,,,THATS NOT U!
speak yo trash, while I flip my ash,
U jus be mad cause ya ain't got my cash.
U both need Mr. Webster to give U a clue,
just LOOK-UP UGLY,,and your see BOTH OF U.
Ya'll ain't gotch chiiit, I'm don wit-DES!!!!!smokin





lionsbrew's photo
Sat 07/09/11 09:51 PM
Stalking my prey a lyrical carnivore
leave with out a trace to keep you wanting more
a real stifling trifling master of war
bringing back it with all the blood guts and gore
i teach you about maneuvers like taking a flank
showing you why i take the supreme generals rank
these words are heavy and pack a punch like tank
ill leave all you suckers like a battleship sank
Born on the twenty forth of july and loved by the sun
hitting it off fast with verses that stun
make a break for it you know you should run
spitting out words like hot lead from a Gatling gun
rhythem comes and goes goes and comes
come on bring it the words not the mums
what you got two left feet and nothing but thumbs?
ill take the lions share and watch you fight for my crumbs
Slipen in and sliden out you know how I roll
so lets just twist up a fatty and smoke up a bowl
what the hell ill dig one more hole
ill leave your life drained mind body and soulsmokin

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Mon 07/11/11 10:37 PM
IN the jungle,,the Lion sleeps tonight.
as his days are fed,
with everyones desires to fight.
Hungry for each new day,
bodies cast sprawled, half eaten away.
Gaurding his mane, casting light to his name.
This jungle his throne, his kingdom, so torn.
The price to just be, the one who never turns away,
Never wanting to be this Lion, so feared,everyday.
Walk with your pride, counting every hide.
Making your name, in your world, and your fame.

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Mon 07/11/11 10:47 PM
Edited by iam4u on Mon 07/11/11 10:49 PM
To all you Ladies,,who once was babies.
What took you away, what bad words did he say,
what has you feeling so low,
where did your dreams and love go,
so many have used you up,
now your soft words,,are just SHUT-UP.
Can I take away your stress,
Shall you put on that party dress.
So your hairs a mess,
I don't give a damn,
can't you try to, re-start,
just one more time.
You have my promise,
I won't break it apart.
I'll just show you,
One real, honest, friendly heart! :heart:

bastet126's photo
Tue 07/12/11 06:47 AM
i never wallow in the sorrow
for too long
i don't wish them dead i just
wish them gone
i live and learn
and at this point
i could be a teacher
with a P H D
but don't pity me
i have a knack to see
the forest through the tree
pick up the peices
of my broken heart scattered
leave my life in tatters
start a new
that's what i do
the tricksters and the fools
can't leave me down too long
i live and breathe where i belong
in the light
it's just my plight
i might cry and
talk some smack
but
i always find
my way back
it's just who...I AM.

soufiehere's photo
Tue 07/12/11 10:30 AM

i never wallow in the sorrow
for too long
i don't wish them dead i just
wish them gone
i live and learn
and at this point
i could be a teacher
with a P H D
but don't pity me
i have a knack to see
the forest through the tree
pick up the peices
of my broken heart scattered
leave my life in tatters
start a new
that's what i do
the tricksters and the fools
can't leave me down too long
i live and breathe where i belong
in the light
it's just my plight
i might cry and
talk some smack
but
i always find
my way back
it's just who...I AM.

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.

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Wed 07/13/11 10:02 AM


i never wallow in the sorrow
for too long
i don't wish them dead i just
wish them gone
i live and learn
and at this point
i could be a teacher
with a P H D
but don't pity me
i have a knack to see
the forest through the tree
pick up the peices
of my broken heart scattered
leave my life in tatters
start a new
that's what i do
the tricksters and the fools
can't leave me down too long
i live and breathe where i belong
in the light
it's just my plight
i might cry and
talk some smack
but
i always find
my way back
it's just who...I AM.

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.
HEY,,YOU ARE I AM....lol
very sweetly scented just like YOU,
As I only wished I was as good as YOU....flowerforyou :heart:

NOW,,,we need to hear your mind Soufie,,,,be it in thoughts as you feel today,,,or just made-up chizt,, just to play...
Come-on girl you know more than me,,,,so give-us some-of-you,,to see

drinker :heart: :banana: :banana: flowerforyou

soufiehere's photo
Wed 07/13/11 10:59 AM
NOW,,,we need to hear your mind Soufie,,,,be it in thoughts as you feel today,,,or just made-up chizt,, just to play...
Come-on girl you know more than me,,,,so give-us some-of-you,,to see
drinker :heart: :banana: :banana: flowerforyou


Pretty sure I am no rapper
I'm too DollyP and dapper
eyes would roll and disappear around the bend.

They would mash me with potatoes
and pelt me with tomatoes
Just to bring the silly screeching to an end.

vivian2981's photo
Wed 07/13/11 12:43 PM


Love this thread Terry!

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Wed 07/13/11 04:50 PM



Love this thread Terry!

Thanks Viv,,it lets everyone talk,,w/o really talking,,,,so it FITS with many here,,,,,NOW,,,,,,,, do YOU want to know something else?????



YES?????



YOU need to do one about Texas,,and you growing up there,,that would be cool as your words I can only imagine,,,lol..so Ya'll come back now,,ya hear......drinker :heart:
You should write something here,,,and trust me,,,YOU CAN RAP,,,lol

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Wed 07/13/11 04:50 PM



Love this thread Terry!

Thanks Viv,,it lets everyone talk,,w/o really talking,,,,so it FITS with many here,,,,,NOW,,,,,,,, do YOU want to know something else?????



YES?????



YOU need to do one about Texas,,and you growing up there,,that would be cool as your words I can only imagine,,,lol..so Ya'll come back now,,ya hear......drinker :heart:
You should write something here,,,and trust me,,,YOU CAN RAP,,,lol

bastet126's photo
Thu 07/14/11 08:04 AM

HEY,,YOU ARE I AM....lol
very sweetly scented just like YOU,
As I only wished I was as good as YOU....flowerforyou :heart:

NOW,,,we need to hear your mind Soufie,,,,be it in thoughts as you feel today,,,or just made-up chizt,, just to play...
Come-on girl you know more than me,,,,so give-us some-of-you,,to see

drinker :heart: :banana: :banana: flowerforyou


like that spin i put on the end? laugh this thread has been alot of fun, i can see it being around for awhile, deservingly so!! well done!! flowerforyou

and soufie even came out, DollyP would be proud. :)

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Sat 07/16/11 09:12 AM
So tell me ladies,,what the HELL do you want or need,

A mouse, a man, or just a male body for you to feed.

Can I give you anymore,

than my five years on here, for you to explore.

Is it my words that I speak, do you think I'm weak.

Do I come-off to much at times,

Is it in my rap, my writes, or my rhymes.

YOU have the floor, I have the seat,

Cannot just THIS man, knock you off your feet.

Hell the babies 18-25 find me really cool,

The 60-75 year ladies, think I rule.

yet the ones who are my age or close anyway,

They never write me, they just look the other way.

I don't want a youngin, nor a lady who see's me as her youngin.

Is it just to much to ask, to find one who see's me as, HER LOVIN,,,

Just a thought is all I project,

trying to understand, why I'm just their reject? :heart: :wink:

A little venting, a little confused, just not wanting to feel abused

Looking, reading, seeing and comply, I was just,,wondering WHY?