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deactivation
a rationalization extravaganza |
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It seems we tend to stay away from haiku's on this site. I would love to have some of the other writers and poets join me in a ku-for-all. I will set the ball rolling........... Blossoms like magnets Wind blows through fragrant tresses Bees are everywhere The above haiku was written in response to a photo prompt ( I've included the photo on my profile page) Petals in a stream Dancing in a dragon dance Gardener's New Year |
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s1ow, thank you for reviving this thread.........I must get writing, do you fancy a photo haiku round? Be back soon.
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Silently hiding in the dew. Tiny transparent drops of morning mist. resting softly on the pedals of my rose. That's great imagery But isn't a Haiku 5,7,5 syllables? Are there exceptions? (I'm not trying to be a knowitall, I honestly don't know) Your right But did ya ever know a poet who followed the rules? |
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Silently hiding in the dew. Tiny transparent drops of morning mist. resting softly on the pedals of my rose. That's great imagery But isn't a Haiku 5,7,5 syllables? Are there exceptions? (I'm not trying to be a knowitall, I honestly don't know) Your right But did ya ever know a poet who followed the rules? Ah, NO! |
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Lingering thoughts of mine
Put onto paper with pen Becomes the mighty poem Tammy |
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a new season here
hoping the sun shines brightly on a better view |
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gathering of friends
community of spirit comfort happiness "Yes Bonny, I fancy that!" lovely one, Pam! and Gossipmpm! |
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for slow (((H)))
Posting your quick wit I picture you pen in hand Shirtless guitar man |
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sun comes out from clouds
Bringing gentle rays to me To bronze my white skin Tammy 7/09 |
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Edited by
BonnyMiss
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Mon 08/17/09 01:48 PM
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A passing curtsey Pink flurry paves the way Summer's unfolding |
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Oh that's so pretty!^^^^^^^
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Oh that's so pretty!^^^^^^^ Thank you M'Lady. I will be posting pictures here for anyone who wants to write a haiku to suit the picture. |
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Light against the dark Orb fades into nothingness I await my dream. |
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Oh I love that idea!!!
I pass the light of the sun Darkness awaits me I find me on the other side Tammy This is cool!!!! Gotta think fast. A good way to help the alzheimers really ! LOL |
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Oh I love that idea!!! I pass the light of the sun Darkness awaits me I find me on the other side Tammy This is cool!!!! Gotta think fast. A good way to help the alzheimers really ! LOL I refuse to allow alzhiemer to visit me !! It is amazing how quickly you can find inspiration when you see a picture in front of you.I loved yours. |
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A summer solstice Ancient ritual abounds Stairway to heaven |
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Light against the dark Orb fades into nothingness I await my dream. scarlet nipple shines on the curve of heavens fire celestial breast |
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A summer solstice Ancient ritual abounds Stairway to heaven Mountains magestic Under setting sun Brings me inspiration so |
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Light against the dark Orb fades into nothingness I await my dream. scarlet nipple shines on the curve of heavens fire celestial breast Shoot!!!!! That was damn damn good!!!! |
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