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Edited by
Pete026
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Sun 11/09/08 10:11 AM
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I wish I knew! Everyone but me knows how to, it seems
Sorry I couldn't help! |
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bluebells dance playful
summers last breath wafts past me my lovers eyes were blue ok, I did one 
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bluebells dance playful summers last breath wafts past me my lovers eyes were blue ok, I did one
Fantastic! Keep it up 
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I like yours, I like night poems
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Green has run away Strange colors are on the hill Winter is almost here cool, I like winter, one of my favorite subjects in poetry |
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haiku first one tried overshadowed by others bow out now with grace 
ok by far my favorite, giggles |
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I like yours, I like night poems Thank you 
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rice wasabi tai
tongue swamped with extra green root eyes stretch open wide 
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Mingle is so cool I wish I could stay in here For eternity (awful, I know I'll try harder)
I like it, I would love to live in a poem of beauty, especially as it changed like the slow moving clouds and warm breeze across a field of flowers. smiles |
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Running with the dogs I've become an animal Inhibitions gone Ok, I love this one, a joining of the heart between man and beast, what an exhilerating thrill that is. |
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Quiet night's rain Opens cacophony Orchestra of bees bonny my dear miss poetess, you have creativity to spare, may you forever spin your verses, smiles humbly |
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Reaching for the sky I wished upon a lone Star May my dreams come true lone star, very cool, you know some people say dragons were actually made from stars and so were angels, LOL kinda of cool thought though, but that kinda makes me wonder, so what are humans made out of, oh yeah, flesh and all that, lol giggles |
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Cats are acting strange
dream of Bacchus fresh in mind no more late night fudge |
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Cats are acting strange dream of Bacchus fresh in mind no more late night fudge Great contributions Raven...............You have mail 
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I have mail, I havn't gotten it yet sweety?
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Getting to know her
Conversation dances like Spirits in the night |
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Getting to know her Conversation dances like Spirits in the night Oh I like this one, very nice. Sorry I had to slip away earlier, I got smacked with some stupid thing earlier and alot of people on here were being stupid about it, and it got into a big thing for a little while so I had to bail. I don't really like attracting that much attention to myself, but I thought, ok never mind what I thought. LOL anyways, rock on and keep writing. |
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Thank you inkraven
I know what you mean about the attention thing. |
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Thank you inkraven
I know what you mean about the attention thing. You are as sweet as sugar, and as refreshing as a  cool drink of water on a desert tongue. Thank you, smiles
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Silently hiding in the dew.
Tiny transparent drops of morning mist. resting softly on the pedals of my rose. |
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