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Quiet night's rain Opens cacophony Orchestra of bees |
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 you go BonnyMiss you seem like a spiritual person 
I am on a roll  I find God and nature so comforting, I could spend hours writing about it.Thank you for visiting, and thank you for contributing to this thread, I am enjoying your works 
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Liquid fire flows Mirrored water reflection Kaleidoscope You got it, you really got it, oh man hey folks never say no to this gal! 
Hey, how's you today? I'm hoping the image shows, you may remember it ( if it does) 
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visual instinct
photograph inspiration making her paint words |
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firery green orb
drawing me into the cold heat afire with envy |
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Vicki!
I haven't seen you for ages! How are you? I didn't write this but I love it (it's from Fight Club) Worker bees can leave Even drones can fly away The Queen is their slave |
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firery green orb drawing me into the cold heat afire with envy Good to see you V and splendid you could join in the Ku-For-All
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Nice to see you both Bonny and Pete!
From within my mind I fight to gain total freedom My insanity |
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Storm has passed
Sailing in quiet water again Moving at last 
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Storm has passed Sailing in quiet water again Moving at last
SUPERB! |
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diver japonaise
sliding deep beneath the blue finds oyster's secret |
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Edited by
BonnyMiss
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Wed 11/05/08 12:24 PM
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Liquid fire flows Mirrored water reflection Kaleidoscope You got it, you really got it, oh man hey folks never say no to this gal!
Hey, how's you today? I'm hoping the image shows, you may remember it ( if it does)
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Crinoline ladies Victorian modesty Shallow Socialite |
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Running with the dogs
I've become an animal Inhibitions gone |
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Reaching for the sky
I wished upon a lone Star May my dreams come true |
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I was told by a haiku master I suck at the ku's. he writes 100 a day. So if that is any indication of my ku ness, I'm not sure I should participate. :(
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I was told by a haiku master I suck at the ku's. he writes 100 a day. So if that is any indication of my ku ness, I'm not sure I should participate. :( Balls to that "master"! If you like what you write that's all that matters
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Well, thank you for your comment, perhaps I shall try once again, now if someone will please refresh my memory as to the proper syllable count, it is 5-7-5 is it not?
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Yep, that's it.
Please do try again, the more the merrier
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I would like to ask another question, how did you get those pictures into the reply? I would like to post a pic with my response.
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