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Now thiers the Ms Poet I know,,, Incredible, Awesome work here between
two Incredible Poets.... Bravoooooooooooooo |
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Thanks Gryphyn, Dane and LAMom.
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Awwwww and the story contiunes love it. This is an awesome story indeed
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This is an incredible story Poet and Karma. Love to read more as the
prophecy continues... |
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Finally, this is it the last installment. We've gone full circle from
the two poems that started this. 'Walks with Wind' and 'Gray Wolf'. Hope you enjoy. Gray Wolf - Destiny The pack has grown strong There's prey aplenty I've watched her grow My time draws near The wounds too many I hear destiny's call Time for another to lead Another to guide I won't fight again My pack is safe here I leave under silver moon Howl to the call I hear I must prepare the way For she will follow soon I maim some of the prey Finding food she should not fear Clear trail I leave That she may follow Avoiding bear and cougar Snarling warning to coyote Howling greetings to brothers Lay path to watered hollow Doubling back that I may follow Enter the land of stones Prey and water hard to find I see where I'll howl my last Where I shall leave my bones The place where I was born Her voice again I hear "I'm not afraid when you are near" Cold nights, she has no pelt Lay and give warmth beside her Awakening without sound To lay known path upon known ground I climb to high ground Howl a greeting, cry a warning I have returned to my home Gray Wolf has returned The line "I am not afraid when you are near." is taken from '-Gray Wolf Totem-' by CCP |
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~And So It Begins~
The sun rises breaking the nights cover I rise from my sleeping furs Clutching the bundle close to me Reaching for the spear Today is the day I know must leave I hear his call in the wind Telling me its time My heart sinks Knowing this is our last journey His time must come to an end He is at the edge of my village I can see him waiting Watching over me As he has done for so long Shaman comes to me "Come girl it is time You must prepare" I follow him to the kiva Going down below the ground In the sacred space I gather all that I need Shaman takes me by the hand Leading me to the hill to the east Atop as the wind blows Softly across our faces And he whispers into the wind "And her name shall be Walks With Wind The prophecy she will bring So she is named So it shall be" Red dust blows in the wind Gritty in my eyes and teeth Scent of juniper fills the air Sitting upon the rock Waiting A crack of thunder fills my ears Lightening arcing across the sky Brilliant purples and pinks Scent of rain mixing with the juniper I close my eyes Clutching the sacred bundle to my chest Spear clutched in my hand Waiting I hear Shaman in the kiva below Singing for the spirits Father standing back weeping "Must it be so" He cries out in the night Mother comforting him "It is her destiny You must let her be For she is the prophecy" I look back at them And my heart stops Aching to be a child again I rise and face the east Muttering silent prayers........ |
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BRAVO *clap clap* BRAVO
THIS IS TOTALY AWESOME!!!!!! HUMM YA DO NEED TO WRITE A BOOK ABOUT THIS STORY IT WOULD INDEED BE A WONDERFUL ONE TO READ FOR ALL AGES!! |
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Awesome,,, Cheers,,, Bravo
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beautiful
now if you can onley put this in a book it would be the perfect goodnight storie for the kids. please do i am your first buyer. |
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I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.
Bravo to both of you. |
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Hey WolfSoul, its all good man..
If YOU found THESE cool to bring back....not a problem and they will be appricated for you doing this,,,, |
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wow beautiful Karma and CCP I thought wonderful there both back and look at the dates.So glad you brought this back..bravo to you both...and I personally miss both of your writes
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Edited by
oya9
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Sat 05/10/08 07:46 AM
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wow beautiful Karma and CCP I thought wonderful there both back and look at the dates.So glad you brought this back..bravo to you both...and I personally miss both of your writes empty the cup so it can be filled ok so your cup spilled and you hardly took a drink but bless the chance to sit in bewilderment! and listen.... there's rushing water flowing and on a cool breeze fresh air from the breath of 'these' voices that sing to you and offer to refill your cup! |
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Rob, man give me a email...
life is such it is. But friends are such as WE ARE... |
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I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good. Bravo to both of you. to be encouraged!! this is one of the delights of the site... and, i had never read it before. how extraordinary... do not miss the threads entitled...... A Mood http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493 Rumi http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576 Gallows http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868 Beans http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519 Locos http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533 Foolish Child http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596 Mine http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056 BeansII http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243 and... Lyrical Response http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153 and well so many many more... |
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I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good. Bravo to both of you. to be encouraged!! this is one of the delights of the site... and, i had never read it before. how extraordinary... do not miss the threads entitled...... A Mood http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493 Rumi http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576 Gallows http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868 Beans http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519 Locos http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533 Foolish Child http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596 Mine http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056 BeansII http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243 and... Lyrical Response http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153 and well so many many more... lol yo! slow ! you rock! |
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I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good. Bravo to both of you. to be encouraged!! this is one of the delights of the site... and, i had never read it before. how extraordinary... do not miss the threads entitled...... A Mood http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493 Rumi http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576 Gallows http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868 Beans http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519 Locos http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533 Foolish Child http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596 Mine http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056 BeansII http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243 and... Lyrical Response http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153 and well so many many more... i was quoting this one!!!! |
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I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good. Bravo to both of you. to be encouraged!! this is one of the delights of the site... and, i had never read it before. how extraordinary... do not miss the threads entitled...... A Mood http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493 Rumi http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576 Gallows http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868 Beans http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519 Locos http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533 Foolish Child http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596 Mine http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056 BeansII http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243 and... Lyrical Response http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153 and well so many many more... i was quoting this one!!!! OMLOG!!!! ROTFLMAO!!!!!! sheesh |
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