Topic: Gray Wolf / Walk with Wind' | |
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yes it is a nice story from you two
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We'll try and make the continuation just as interesting. Thank you all.
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I will be waiting for more, Now where in the world is that Vampire? She
said she will be rising from the grave soon. G |
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Great writing you two...
CCP and Karma, nice to have you both back... although your absence was short, it seemed forever... Missed your powerful enticing words... |
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Wow, awesome...
Excellent creative team! |
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Our sire watches us hunt
We circle around, wind in face Our packmates on the other side The prey quivers, poised to flee They have scented my brothers The small one is ours, our test The female shall fall to adults Our brothers get closer, prey breaks Running to us, running to death We rush to strike, leap and bite Take it down, bite the throat Warm blood flows, we have killed White death, hunger, kept at bay Female falters, searches for young Adults strike and take her down Howls rise, the pack shall eat Tear at flesh, taste the blood Growl as one gets too close Bared teeth flash, ears laid back Return to feed, I must survive An adult approaches our kill Weak, without status, hungry Turning I face, my hackles rise Fangs bared I challenge him Another test, I must be strong He moves to feed, I growl Leap twist of head, jaws snap I have his lip, he tries to turn Tries to flee, I hang on He drops, rolls, submits Victory is mine, return to feed I have beaten white death Met the challenge of hunger Begun my climb, my journey I shall learn many things Meet many brothers, have many names Okwaho, Otahyo:ni, Ho'nehe, Ma'iitsoh To my people I shall ever be Gray Wolf My destiny awaits, my future begins |
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karma you RAWK!!!!
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Awesome Karma damn ya two together can make sweet harmony
when it comes to the words they blend so well the flow is just Awesome. |
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-Gray Wolf Totem-
The days have grown shorter and colder I spend most of my days with Shaman And my nights in the hogan with my mother and father Curled up in my sleeping furs with the sacred bundle Listening to it sing me to sleep And filling my dreams Leaning against the wall is the spear from first man It too speaks to me Telling me stories of past battles And future wars Still to young to fully understand what is happening to me I think this is normal and all the children have this Every morning as I walk to Shaman's hogan I hear in the distance a wolfs cry It strikes my heart Not with fear but comfort I walk slowly on my little legs Chattering endlessly to the morning sun Not caring who looks at me strangely I am filled with child wonder In everything I see When I come to Shaman's hogan I slip through the door quickly Eager to be asked "Girl what did you dream What did the bundle sing to you Did the spear speak to you" Knowing Shaman will listen to my every word I remember them all with crystal clear clarity Every word spoken and sung Every dream that has come So I tell my stories thinking I am simply entertaining I tell him of the wolf cries I hear in my walk to his hogan How it strikes my heart not in fear but comfort Shaman tells me that is a sign That Wolf must be my totem And spirit guide I smile feeling great comfort from his words I watch him carving in stone And ask what is "Girl since you came here I too have dreamed I have seen this wolf Gray Wolf I call him So I carve him For you You must wear it around your neck It will keep you safe" He places it on a braided thong And ties it securely around my neck I pat it feeling warmth spread throughout my soul And I whisper so softly that only Gray Wolf can hear "I am not afraid when you are near I know no fear" |
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Beautiful piece Poet.
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whoa!!! too cool---way too go ya guys---
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Very COOL, and Taking, we are now at your mercy's to continue, PLEASE, we want more,,,,,,and we are making sure that the little girl is SAFE!,,,lol |
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(( Ms Poet )) (( Karma))
This is the most Incredible Journey of Life I have ever Read,,, Bravoooooooooo Amazing, Incredible, Brilliant |
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Thank you everyone
G..I'm still workin on my Vampire pieces lol I'll pop one in here soon |
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Wow! Awesome Karma and CCP...Very nice indeed. keep up the good work! |
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Nicely done guys. I am highly enjoying this WOW. You guys are awesome
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Harmony at its finest...
Wonderful to read this continuing story... |
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Thank you everyone. There's more to come.
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This is a truly a captivating story that is unwinding here.A story with
enormous depth and realism.Then comes another poets extension harmoniously weaving into this story.A tale catapulting to epic proportion.Truly breath taking;Karma and CCP.Godspeed!Cybear |
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All I can say is I want more.
G |
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