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This weary poet upon an adventurous course
Where timid hearts travel short to endorse Lined with sorrow among-st thickets of pain Navigating blinding curves in sheeting rain Perilous journey with such diminished sight Steadily forward through star filled night Gathering knowledge from the ones who dared Peering the dark woods I ominously stared Dreadful cries piercing though chilled air Wailings of the wounded have come to beware This moment caused shivers and paralyzed me While the wind licked upon my skin steadily So many were tales of great sorrow and pain Yes deeply saddened for I could not sustain These salty tears rolled down my cold cheek Unanswered solace and comfort they did seek There spirits gliding on the turbulent air Seeking some comfort from their long despair Offering them closure with my humbled quill A mere mortal standing upon a desolate hill With unwavering courage I did open my heart By virtue of kindness lends peaceful depart Within this vortex lies these souls unknown Unrighteous their deaths served by man alone Not vengeance but justice I desperately seek Tempered by law;I shall stand for this weak Rest now weary for you shall no longer roam I carry your olive branch as I venture home Written by CyPoet 5/2/08    
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bravo
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you have a sensitive, caring Soul...
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well done cy
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you have a sensitive, caring Soul...
Yes he does,, and a Heart that ever flows
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Edited by
CyPoet
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Fri 05/02/08 08:23 PM
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Kim
Pam
AngeLight
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Denise
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Beautiful write Cy
(((Bearhuggie)))
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That is beautiful!
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MsTeddy
{{{{{{bear~huggie}}}}}} Cleo
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Place your head upon my heart, A comfort warm I wrap. With the quill that pens the hope, Your caring soul, for that, Fords the river flowing. And bows with bended knee. Gentle man so deeply felt, Eyes that really see. Allow my hand to soothe, The weary brow that's yours. You have claimed a burden, Noble, more than words. Though distance seems unyielding, You have found this way, To hold our weary tattered lives, Encouraging your say. Please, place your loving spirit, Rest upon our hearts, Thank you for reminding, Your love is whole, not part. Raine Les 5/02/2008 |
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Simply,Amazing!This is such a beautiful & heart felt write.In addition to that such a perfect compliment to the OP.I truly Luv'd that write.U are a brilliant writer who reaches very deep levels & your prose is brilliant.I thank U immensely for this write & perfect compliment.Much Luv & Godspeed,Cy {{{bear~hug}}}
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Upon Place your head upon my heart, A comfort warm I wrap. With the quill that pens the hope, Your caring soul, for that, Fords the river flowing. And bows with bended knee. Gentle man so deeply felt, Eyes that really see. Allow my hand to soothe, The weary brow that's yours. You have claimed a burden, Noble, more than words. Though distance seems unyielding, You have found this way, To hold our weary tattered lives, Encouraging your say. Please, place your loving spirit, Rest upon our hearts, Thank you for reminding, Your love is whole, not part. Raine Les 5/02/2008 That's love!
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Sadie beautiful words for a womderful.caring man...hugs to you both
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This weary poet upon an adventurous course Where timid hearts travel short to endorse Lined with sorrow among-st thickets of pain Navigating blinding curves in sheeting rain Perilous journey with such diminished sight Steadily forward through star filled night Gathering knowledge from the ones who dared Peering the dark woods I ominously stared Dreadful cries piercing though chilled air Wailings of the wounded have come to beware This moment caused shivers and paralyzed me While the wind licked upon my skin steadily So many were tales of great sorrow and pain Yes deeply saddened for I could not sustain These salty tears rolled down my cold cheek Unanswered solace and comfort they did seek There spirits gliding on the turbulent air Seeking some comfort from their long despair Offering them closure with my humbled quill A mere mortal standing upon a desolate hill With unwavering courage I did open my heart By virtue of kindness lends peaceful depart Within this vortex lies these souls unknown Unrighteous their deaths served by man alone Not vengeance but justice I desperately seek Tempered by law;I shall stand for this weak Rest now weary for you shall no longer roam I carry your olive branch as I venture home Written by CyPoet 5/2/08
Wow. Read this one twice Poet~EXCELLENT!
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This weary poet upon an adventurous course Where timid hearts travel short to endorse Lined with sorrow among-st thickets of pain Navigating blinding curves in sheeting rain Perilous journey with such diminished sight Steadily forward through star filled night Gathering knowledge from the ones who dared Peering the dark woods I ominously stared Dreadful cries piercing though chilled air Wailings of the wounded have come to beware This moment caused shivers and paralyzed me While the wind licked upon my skin steadily So many were tales of great sorrow and pain Yes deeply saddened for I could not sustain These salty tears rolled down my cold cheek Unanswered solace and comfort they did seek There spirits gliding on the turbulent air Seeking some comfort from their long despair Offering them closure with my humbled quill A mere mortal standing upon a desolate hill With unwavering courage I did open my heart By virtue of kindness lends peaceful depart Within this vortex lies these souls unknown Unrighteous their deaths served by man alone Not vengeance but justice I desperately seek Tempered by law;I shall stand for this weak Rest now weary for you shall no longer roam I carry your olive branch as I venture home Written by CyPoet 5/2/08
Wow. Read this one twice Poet~EXCELLENT!
MsWizard Thx!sweetheart.{{{bear~hug}}}
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Excellent write...
 
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Very good read indeed....well done Cy.
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Edited by
CyPoet
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Sat 05/03/08 09:03 AM
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Very good read indeed....well done Cy.
Excellent write...
Thx!guys.I am honored & truly blessed to be surrounded & in the company of such great writers.I Luv your writings very much & they help to keep my spirits lifted & to remain inspired.I thank U greatly 4 sharing w/all of us.Deeply grateful are we.Godspeed!Cy.
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Beautiful, just lovely.
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