thanks michael...hey the day is almost upon us :)

....My Sweet Valentine...

I look up at the starry night,
Shinning down on me all bright
The night wind in the sky sings out
Kiss her gently under the moon lite nite

I heard coming in the distance
Her laughter came to me in an instant
It rises up and shower me
Take anything but that from me

I have walked and walked until I found thee
Heaven's splendor for all to see
A love so free like the river Nile
Flowing gently for miles and miles

I inhaled her beauty like fresh red roses
Each petal a boquet of fragnance growing
Bursting through the autumn night
Showering sweetness across the sky.

I cherish you, sweet valentine
I glory in knowing you'll always be mine
I drink of your love to fill my cravings
The splendor of which is so amazing.

There's so much to you my sweet flower
Hidden inside like a silent tower
Now it escapes like rays of sunshine
Showering across the glorious sky.

Mark Hill

very romantic CCP...good stuff

love and loss is a hard road to thread but you'll find the strength to
the very end

CCP great poem, very meaningful

Txgl another great one...I enjoy your writing

great job michael very revealing

that's beautiful LAMom..well done

awesome work....romantic

texgal, that was beautiful

michael, that's powerful

that was awesome...taking it slow

thanks...it's a beautiful, powerfull emotion

The soft beauty of your love saturates me
Like sweet smooth wine
The smell of it like red roses
Scattered throughout the sky.

The liquid sweetness of your voice
And sweet splendor of your smile
Shower me like sweet petals
Raining down from August sky.

I hunger for your sweet embrace
An little dew drops of your love
It is indeed a pure aroma
From you my love a fragrant flower.

The sight of you illuminates my senses,
Sending cravings without disguise
My love for you a constant hunger
Beaming through lascivious eyes.

If you leave but for a second,
My heart will leap in that brief instance
Life like that I stare in wonder
Is heaven tumbling from the sky?

My love for you a transparent fountain
The source of which was born in heaven
I’ll love you till all tomorrows
Are bright days that never ends.

mark hill 2007

thanks guys

thanks LAMom...the power of love

thanks, it's the first i've written of on love & lost

Somewhere up the road,
You’ll be hurt like you’re hurting me.
Even though you see me cry,
My love for you will never die.

You can laugh now my sweet lady,
Someday I know I’ll see you cry.
I’m not ashamed to fall on my knees,
And beg you take me back, baby please.

Then there’s your lover on the side,
This just might be my demise.
People think that I’m am crazy,
Always staying by your side.

I know I’m being scandalized,
Baby it’s like being vandalized.
No matter what you do,
My love for you is always true.

At night you go and have your fun,
Leaving me at home undone.
Am I a tool of love’s fool?
Is this the cost of loving you?

I think of all the lonely nights,
Hope it’s not my final plight.
At times I hate just loving you,
My love for you is always true.

At times I wish that I could hate,
With hell’s fury and no negate.
The cost of love in loving,
Is a one way street with no return.

Leaving you is no debate,
The chains of love are my restraint
I’ll love you till the day I die,
Will this be my ultimate demise?

Mark Hill 2007

wow! great poem...great insight

Gone, where did she go?
Like the wind, gate swinging
Dust settling on murky water
Just like I’m feeling

Words unspoken, torn, broken
World spinning
Lightening flashing
Thunder clashing
Rain falling
Sinking, sorrow, drowning, drowning

Tears, blinding
Hallow shell, empty well, depleted
Purgatory? Hell! Burning
Sighing, crying, dying

Alone, darkness, bottomless
Crawling, groping, tumbling, falling
Lost, despair, depression
Bottomless, no end…

Meaningless, utterly meaningless
She came, she’s gone,
Wind blows round and round
Rivers flowing into the sea
The sea? Where does it go?
Meaningless!

Caught, in a cruel net, snared
Fighting, Fighting
No sighing, no crying, no dying, no more!
Rising, rising like the sun
Shinning, brighter, brighter
Like the morning star
At last, triumphant!

Mark Hill 2007