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Yes I would like to give this a try,
if you read my poems,I'm a lonely guy, not in desperation,but in frustration, do my lonely dreams fly oh so high, living for my last sunset, hoping for a loving bet, take this chance to find romance, show me true,your loving chance, show me YOU,in your loving dance, don't leave it all up to chance, take my hand and walk with me, read my poems and truely see, to know this man,you want with thee, if you love me true,our souls set free... in the west where I was born, within my test from there I'm torn, forgotten not of my birthright, for I am not,forgotten Knight, sweet sunsets and forgotten nights, I do remember those beautiful sights, from high Sierra was my lost trail, camping, fishing, another ghost tale, by the fire,to last all night, within those arms of sweet delite, return to my home,I just might, return to my own,my thirst for light, from the west,I've felt most free, watch a sunset,with lonely me..........Lonely Soul |
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Michael,,, You are amazing, i have so enjoyed this journey into your
soul,,,, Thank you for sharing so willing... |
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Another good one M very nice.
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thanx,y'all...just reaching out...
baring a little more of my soul each time I write... |
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Great Mike...
Truly Beautiful |
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Thank You SCG...Thank You...
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another good one..do u realize this is number 109...that i know
of..lol..all of them so good |
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wow...that many?
is that a record?lol what is th record...does anyone know??? |
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nice written, 1313
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thanx S.D.
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M I'm sure you hold the record in here for the most poems hands down!!
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but there are so many other poets here...
like CCP has alot of poems out,what is her count? and SCG has alot...how many? and JTWHITE...??? has anyone been counting? not that it matters...just asking... |
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and Gryphyn's poems are up there too...
he's in love,so I expect more from him soon too... |
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Hummm we talking numbers not who lol count them I'm not gonnna too lol
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maybe Morena knows?
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Michael i love this poem and i got to say watching a sunset with you ,i
think would be heaven |
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sure...we could walk along th beach too,then go out for dinner over
candlelight and soft music in th background... or just stay on th beach and build a bonfire... and listen to the waves as they roll in... |
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Again just say when:) i would be a fool not to your nice looking:) and a
poet to :) plus you have a great sence of humor |
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awwwww shucks...
Thank You!!! |
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WHEN
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