I am glad you like my writing. Thanks so much for your replies.

just a thought on this subject. Bring science into this. Atoms are constantly moving. They are the one component of the body that constantly change some pass through us and are miles away in a flash.

With this constant movement we have friction ... which charges these atoms. Now your brain waves are measured as energy. Tests can show the exact areas of the brain working during situations.

With that said... a thought is energy... a positive thought creates positive energy in a sense.... thus charging the atoms passing through at that time with a positive charge. It goes about its journey and that energy bumps around sharing that energy. the more positive energy you create the more positive energy surrounding you.

Maybe.... just maybe this is what begins to draw positive things to us. Im no scientist.... but I see how this could be. Like I said just my thoughts

Sweet is the breath of life. Yes... a simple breath. In that breath you taste her essence. So alive .... I search for words that describe this feeling.

How does the wind carress ones soul? How does the thunder become ones heart beat?
How do tears of past become the river that washes away the pain of broken hearts?

It is that breath of life. That sweet sweet whisper " I Love You ". Whispered into your ear and felt throughout your body. Thundering hearts beating as one while you embrace. And all the pains of past are washed away as you look into her eyes and know.... you are loved.

Yes ... I love you is no longer a phrase. It is a new existance. It is the rose bud opening to share its beauty with a world searching.... dreaming... craving... longing for lifes purpose.

Love is lifes purpose. When you find it.... hold it close. Feel the emotions and embrace it. Nothing in the world is stronger, more powerful, as beautiful, or more valuable than true love.

Looks change with time, Money made and lost, things misplaced, stolen, or worn out. When all things are gone.... true love still stands strong. Nothing or no person can ever take true love from two souls. It is the dream.... the fantasy... it is forever. I am alive.

So so sweet is her breath of life..... Heaven on earth.

Forever

Wow.... Posted so long ago... and now here I am Knowing this feeling myself... Her breath is the wind... her whispers of I love you sing to my soul...

Journey said it best.... "When you love a woman, you see your world inside her eyes"

Its a beautiful day.

Thank you all for the replies. I would love to say I appreciate that others enjoy my writings ... yet some of them come from a source deeper than even I understand.

let your words flow softly
lay them gently on angels wing
echoes of their angelic song
as their flight doth message bring
oh hear the words of heaven
captured in winters breeze
sent with but a whisper
their meaning my heart doth seize

just a quick thought... wrote it sitting here
mind racing ... contemplating life... living in a daydream... or an illusion of an existence which never was... are we but a thought in the mind of a greater being ... an undecided project that changes as do our lives.... until that final moment .... when our death in this world is our actual beginning.

oh how the minutes tick away
seconds fill them overflowing
as hours pass us by
soft and gentle sigh
but why

do we cling to who we were
how it used to be
or live a moment as it comes
just wait and we will see

better still... the fight to become... but what of destiny... an unknown future ... battle on ... yet tiss but wasted war... do we dare hope for more.... who commands these waves crashing upon our shore

yes my mind races on..... questions to be asked ...yet to whom.... answers to be found.... not knowing where to look.... our curiosity bound.... contained with only hope.... hope of a brighter day... when words flow so freely ... we live the questions and become the answers we have sought .... realizing ourselves we fought

and now .... I breathe.... I take a breath and calm my wayward mind.... hoping pleasure in my thoughts ... You did find

It's 2 AM I'm sitting
The screen has slowed it's pace
Is it that my posts are death
And reality is erased?

I analize this issue
The answer I can not find
I write a poem to sooth my head
And easy my troubled mind.

I do believe the answer
Lies within the time
Everyone has gone to bed
And I should be in mine.

Thank you shy...I am glad you liked it

Open wounds
Salt,the spice of pain.
Flames beneath my golden bridge,
destroyed with Satans reign.

City streets
chaotic roads of lust.
Shadows hide the evil stone
which grinds our hearts to dust.

Lifes journey
A path yet still unclear
Hope comes forth with rising sun,
for shadows disappear.

Plastic birds
in rubber trees.
Cats and dogs
with wooden fleas.

Clippity clop
they dance around.
As chocolate spiders
are gobbled down.

Tiny drops
of licorice rains
flood the forest
of candycanes.

Through streets of life
The blackness flows,
as God protects
from evils woes.

Thanks Drew

Warriors, full, bask in the sun.
They dined as Kings with battle won.
Judge them not, for wars they rage.
They are but words on anothers page.

A book of visions written by dreams.
Reality lost within its seams.
Slowly fades the gentle light,
as day resigns to dark of night.

At last their weary souls can rest,
as humbled hearts survived their test.
For peace they pray there is half a chance,
as God conducts tomorrows dance.

I drift into the pages,
Of the book of broken dreams.
I find my name a hundred times,
On every page it seems.

I give my love too easy.
Passion from heart and soul.
At first you crave forever,
Then the bells of ending toll.

If I am such a writer,
As my words are felt within.
Then why must the book I'm writing,
Be ripped to shreads again.

My pages stained with tear drops.
The seams, they fall apart.
I copywrite these memories
Printed on my broken heart.

dont get me wrong...I still open doors for women out of respect.... I love with heart and soul... I am that hopeless romantic... but im not going to play that Im so lost without you game anymore.... its like ...you want to be crapped on or beat....go to him.... you want unconditional love ... passion ...,. multiple orgasms ... two and three times a night at times then Im your man..... that is fact not fiction.... so they make choices that determine their destiny

Dude if she says there is no connection.... she would know and she isn't lieing . Why there is no connection is the element you need to research and then find yourself. Present yourself to a woman without trying to be what you think she wants you to be. if not then you are presenting the lie to her.

Get friggin real..... If a guy would do only half of these he would be awesome????? No.... women like that for a day or two then the guy who has been an azz to her calls and she runs back to him.

They like the attention but tend to return to the bad boys.Leaving the ones who respect them in a haze.

You want sound advice... be yourself and dont bend to fit the shape they want.... because tomorrow they will want you to bend the other way and even steel ...when bent back and forth a few times will break.

Darkest days arise again.... silent .... tempting scream... what does it all mean?
Flames burning deep inside...enjoyed the ride.. yet charing forevers dream.
Flavor.... taste my kiss of passion.... poison tips the tongue...death to love so young.

Die to me sweet memory
With her ...walk away
slip into the shadows
Hidden you must stay

Nomore ...what could have been.
Never again...a tear I shed.
I write the book of sad goodbyes
Only the cover I think she read.

Shread the useless pages.
Burn it verse by verse.
Erase it all from memory
Redeem me of this curse.

To demons on my future path.
these words I pray you heed.
I slay you all with Godly thoughts
As my torture does now recede.

Darkest days may rise again.
This time I'm prepared
I Have the light within me
My heart shall be spared.

no thoughts on this one... this was not an event in my life by the way ... just thoughts of the different ways people meet

I peer into your lonely eyes
though distant they may be.
I feel the warmth of passion rise
as close you move to me.

Your body sways to beating heart
romantic is the tune.
Your gaze and I are miles apart
within this smoke filled room.

Your mind is filled with a distant shore
as I follow your angelic dance.
Your bra falls upon the floor
as I readjust my pants.

I place a twenty dollar bill
upon your golden skin
you raise your garter oh so high
as I slowly slip it in.

A smile at last adorns your face
Our eyes have finally met
At once our souls begin the chase
for love without regret.

Alone at last outside the club
your shift is finally done.
Your shoulders receive a gentle rub
from a heart that you have won.

We talk awhile as we journey home
this time a walk for two.
Our souls embrace with just a touch
a passion we never knew.

Flesh to flesh we are as one
it seems as though a dream.
Tonight we dance the lovers dance
among the mist and steam.

All my life
I dreamed of you
And how our life would be
Romantic visions
Filled my mind
I wished you could only see

By the grace of God
We finally met
I could hardly speak
As your angelic voice
Whispered hello
A tear rolled down my cheek

You are my sun
My golden light
Which brightens my lonely days
The wind beneath
My open arms
Like the willow I begin to sway

You are my sea
My gentle wave
Caressing my sandy shore
Rising through
My pains of past
While washing them out the door

These are the things
I wish to say
When that moment comes along
Yet till my sun
Casts golden light
I’ll sing my lonely song