Yes.

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In a few paragraphs, you seem to write your requirements clearly and logically. Yet, if I were a lady in your age group looking for a cute guy such as yourself, the tone of your wants comes off sounding like a bunch of rules and regulations with no time for enjoyment. Most females will be responsible these days for themselves. They most likely have a male relative that gives them life guidance and, well, that's the sort of tone I am 'hearing' in your profile.

Can you change your style of delivery a bit to make yourself sound approachable but firm on who you are?

That is the only question I would ask.

Cheers on your confidence!