Community > Posts By > myanimalcracker
Topic:
Just Thought You Should Know
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Amazing write, (((pkd))).
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Stranger to My Eye
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very nice ![]() Thank you Mr ![]() |
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Topic:
Electric Fantasy
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Electric fantasy, touch me not so lightly
sparks ignited by your skin; now I dream your body nightly From the summer rain came fire; my metallic sins so cold warmed by your bare, stripped outlets as your angel-eyes foretold Where was it I walked when from this place I strayed? Yesterday is just a light blue blur as memories start to fade The convulsing you inspired when wet hands met voltage strong changed corruption to attention and a pure night to pure wrong Stirrings like volcanoes can blind a woman’s ambitions and the sweetest invitation can erase one’s superstitions Though when I walked away I walked away with soul intact the moment first alone I conjured all those spirits back with a jolt of pure arousal channeled through my icy veins electrocution’s easy when your fingers numb the pain As I sat strapped to the chair, shaking, bound by locks of gold Your name drooling down my lips with the devil’s bounty sold This was just another what-if; another chance in reach then blown just a fantasy electric; a treasure barely shown Ten years in the making; what’s a saintly girl to do? Walk along in summer daydreams; electrified by you |
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Topic:
Stranger to My Eye
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Thank you (((angel
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Topic:
Committment
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Thank you (((s1ow
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Topic:
Stranger to My Eye
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Lovely Write. ![]() ![]() Thank you, Jason ![]() ![]() |
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Topic:
loneliness
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Very nice write, Isaac
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Topic:
Stranger to My Eye
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Thank you so much
Harold ![]() ![]() go ![]() isaac (thank you for such a wonderful compliment) ![]() 1956 ![]() |
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Topic:
Stranger to My Eye
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I knew him in a glance
and yet I was afraid there is much to contemplate here not the place for leaping and yet I feel the longing to do just that. He with that gentle manner and unknowing glint of something familiar yet never seen by my eye before. “There is not a word yet” the Muppets say “for old friends who’ve just met” and I suddenly understand just what that line means. |
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Topic:
Committment
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Thank you
michael ![]() maxxx ![]() JT ![]() |
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(((JT)))
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Topic:
Committment
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Split is my heart
one side wants purpose the other wants love why can I not have both? I implore the fates with tear-stained cheeks of sadness I offer them my scars as an offering and accept that with this wish comes sacrifice and I ask again why can I not have both? and with gentle understanding they peer into my face all shattered and tell me that I can have all it is I seek but that to do so is to work harder than I have ever done do I accept this burden do I accept this fate do I accept that I must shoulder it all upon a back that will bleed that will bruise that will ache unceasing? Yes. |
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Topic:
Peek Into Something
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Thank you:
MisKim ![]() ahuha ![]() s1ow ![]() ![]() |
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Topic:
Where the Sidewalk Begins
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Thank you
s1ow ![]() pkd ![]() LA ![]() |
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Topic:
Peek Into Something
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I love the shy of your smile
the way it peeks out of you like a little boy wanting to play while twinkles flicker like wee stars in those eyes He sneaks glances from the corners of his chocolate eyes melting me completely with raven locks that threaten to fly and cannot be told to sit still and behave. I see the grown man he is bowed by time and has had lessons forced and lessons seen he is wise and strong and knows his heart like a well-read novel well used and gently handled I see that young man wistful and committed looking for what his heart seeks certain that time will reward his labor with a sudden moment of clarity and deep bonded surprise that never quite loses its enchantment When I look upon you I see you as you are as you have been as you were meant to be. You are a miracle at any measure and my heart loves you completely in every age and form. |
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Topic:
Sensing Humor
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I study the body in the mirror
and try not to think of elephants and how we have much in common I giggle cause the thought, though annoying is quite humorous just the same I wiggle my bottom and smile for thoughts of vanity do not much offend so much as pass fleetingly behind my sense of the ridiculous and I am just honest enough to admit that I am. |
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I enjoyed this one, as well.
Although, it makes me want to give you a hug... (((JTstrang))) ![]() |
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You write very well...
I enjoyed this ![]() ![]() |
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Topic:
Where the Sidewalk Begins
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Thanks Kat! ![]() ![]() That was fun! ![]() Took us long enough to actually get around to it...lol ![]() ![]() |
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Topic:
Where the Sidewalk Begins
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***Collaboration with Jason (d4tc)***
Square peg round hole nice to meet you. I lost my marbles years ago and have not had the need or desire, if I am honest to find them. Irony unravels the; Round peg Square hole Unroll the scroll picking up each others marbles as we go We missed it that twinkle that darts about the room looking for something amusing or at least the next something. It starts with a dart 20 questions 20 numbers one bullseye Two eyes look at two eyes looking back at two eyes knocking rocks trying to make a spark They missed it and this pleases her in some way that she cannot explain any more than she can explain why those who get it, get it why those who don’t, never will. Still trying to catch a fish by it's gill I wonder if he will and she will Ever get the bite Seldom do fish bite dreams laid by night a stationary flight |
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