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where you lay
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Thank you all
TB always your gracious 2kids obliged as ever Harsh post my friend and grateful for you Sh |
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Topic:
where you lay
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very nice one my friend you really are amazing at writing :) As i lay awake alone in bed and saw the sparkling stars in the sky i longed for your presence even more and my pain became more sore i wish nothing but your presence i count thy steps in the air even the wind brings me your sweet fragrance as i sleep in bed longing for your presence more :) I woke to brilliant blue The moon a ghost in the sky Whisps of lace like beauty A tear drop in my eye The Sun beats me But I won't let it beat me Your my ghost My eyes flood just cry's I hold your hand Hug where you stand Refuse for others impose My heart is your friend A life short lived Please grace me forward Support and forgive |
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Topic:
where you lay
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very nice one my friend you really are amazing at writing :) As i lay awake alone in bed and saw the sparkling stars in the sky i longed for your presence even more and my pain became more sore i wish nothing but your presence i count thy steps in the air even the wind brings me your sweet fragrance as i sleep in bed longing for your presence more :) Post post post, |
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where you lay
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The dead of night wrestled my eyes
My dream coat fell to the floor I fumbled naked for relief Excited to come back to warmth I rubbed my eyes as I came too This regular night ritual Autopilot now turned off As I passed my vessel of you I climbed this mountain Slipped between the sheets Cusp my hands, shed my tears This night relived for years |
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Crumpled
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Imagery is a friend of yours,
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The Power of Fear......
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Viki,
This is outstanding, what a fine contribution to the world you are. I have taken my have off and bowed my head in silence for all those we now only see in a dream that is a nightmare that we all witnessed all those years ago. X x |
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I walk alone
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Great anticipation waiting for you to post,
Your write did not fail you, well done my friend. |
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9-11
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This event touched many people and I'd feel rude not to pay my respects here,
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My Craft
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xx dragging up an old write x Keep writing, not sure how I missed this |
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linger
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The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still Thanks 2kids, as always |
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~pinch me,please
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Intriguing write this one
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Shine on you
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That was totally nice everythign about it was so nice its nice to read what you write Thank you shugah |
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linger
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings I agree with lady totally. |
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Fork In The Road
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TY! Thank you for sharing |
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linger
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ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :) Post and see what happens, these are good people |
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Fork In The Road
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Lost in a whimsical fantasy A moment clasped for infinity Unspoken words... dreams to live Pondering thoughts fill the head To live this day in the here and now Not get lost in an ancient unrequited vow Flirtations gaze, a sparkling smile Raptured path, luscious extra mile Untrodden darkness waits beyond today Fork in the road, each path unpaved Yesterdays comfortable is not living Radiant choices beam in thanksgiving All that I am, all I can be I walk the path which is always "me" Poetic songs, long dangling curls Lost in a silence where my mind whirls Waltzing through days with unwaivering faith Tempest winds and still feeling safe Knowing a greater plan exists As life's road beckons with winds and twists Embracing the darkness of the unknown I walk this path and I walk alone Angels watch and smile with love For all I do comes with blessings from above To love and give with no expectation The here and now is our creation With every journey comes a choice A fork in the road which I rejoice A journey of words well written |
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linger
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not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings So man. People here why shadow me, I find inspiration there too. You can write Try it, see what happens, great people here |
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linger
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your fragrance is still in the breeze and my emotions freeze still remember holding ur hand and watching a live band miss those days a lot and your sweet goodnight kiss hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not Start posting, you read well my friend |
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linger
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just enough to..tantalize...... Isn't just enough |
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linger
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The pillow echo's your presence
My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still |
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