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Topic: linger
poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 09:35 AM
The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 09/09/12 09:36 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 09/09/12 10:06 AM
just enough to..tantalize......

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Sun 09/09/12 10:11 AM
your fragrance is still in the breeze and my emotions freeze still remember holding ur hand and watching a live band miss those days a lot and your sweet goodnight kiss hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 10:14 AM
just enough to..tantalize...... Isn't just enough

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 10:14 AM
your fragrance is still in the breeze and my emotions freeze still remember holding ur hand and watching a live band miss those days a lot and your sweet goodnight kiss hows it can u add them to ur poem my friend after making changes though dont knw if its good enough or not Start posting, you read well my friend

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Sun 09/09/12 10:22 AM
not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 10:32 AM
not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings So man. People here why shadow me, I find inspiration there too. You can write Try it, see what happens, great people here

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Sun 09/09/12 10:46 AM
ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :)

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 10:49 AM
ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :) Post and see what happens, these are good people

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/09/12 11:45 AM
ill give it a try but u are an amazing writer :) Isn't he just an amazing talent. What a blessed woman she must be to share her love with you. Very nice.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sun 09/09/12 11:49 AM
not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings Please post Harsh..... I really enjoyed reading you.

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 09/09/12 11:58 AM
not as good as u my friend i get inspired from your writings Please post Harsh..... I really enjoyed reading you. I agree with lady totally.

harsh2019 Joined Tue 06/05/12 Posts: 314	Mon 09/10/12 12:25 PM
ill give it a try tomorrow need to find a subject to write on thanks i really appreciate all your views :)

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 09/10/12 12:26 PM
^^^^^

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 09/10/12 12:29 PM
The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Mon 09/10/12 12:44 PM
The pillow echo's your presence My arm touches where you lay I barely recall your kiss goodbye But your lips linger still Thanks 2kids, as always

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 05/27/16 10:44 AM
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poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 05/27/16 10:44 AM
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