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thanks for that, made me smile. (((Rich)))...Do you have any idea how much I like you!!! Another one just for you Thank you for that Vicki, |
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thanks for that, made me smile.
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Subtle
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subtle Mig.
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Shine on you
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thank you Ladywind and Scotti, kind words.
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beautiful sinner
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interesting write.
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I now know
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sad, i agree, seems a little lesson in there maybe.
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Snuggling Under the Stars
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thank you, a picture perfect moment with the moon broken only by the gentle rise of the tide.
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Shine on you
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Beautiful write.... So many lives weaved into the tapestry of the Creator. |
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thank you Leigh, seems i didn't manage to comment.↲ thank you Rawwr and tb, much obligied by your kind words,
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~ like honey
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it is great to read, i am a fan of your mine.
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~ i'm pink...
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smiles for you, i enjoy your writing.
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Shine on you
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As the eye of heaven dips deep in the sky I stand facing west with a tear in my eye, It’s deep orange beams cast one final wave and right there & then, in the same light we bathe. However, as is with its daily chore, on Its anticlockwise journey it still must endure. During a magnificent glow, a celestial blush I reach forth my heart, almost unheard, just a hush, to grant me a deed on Its west-worldly rush to connect me and you with the warmth of its touch. So with the cloak of darkness and the flow of the night does beg the Suns grace for the ebb of Its light. I have asked its last light, its very best ray to shine down on you as it passes your way. Through dusk until dawn I’ll be your nights Knight, my torch of endearment will burn evils plight. My Sleeping Beauty has now awoke to the morning song of the birds, a soft chorus is spoke Your guardian will rest now, tired and worn I’ll be there forever, to you I am sworn Tears and cheeks still are my friends I agree with Ted...This breathes not only life into the deepest sorrow, but hope into the living.... |
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humanity calls
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Nice write.... Thanks up |
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I never knew you....
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Enjoyed as Ever
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humanity calls
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Nice write Poppashroom.. Bring on Unity.. Indeed, together |
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humanity calls
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Lovely write Rich...Not toying with tense, rhyming Always grateful Vicki x |
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humanity calls
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Lovely write Rich...Not toying with tense, rhyming Always grateful Vicki x |
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humanity calls
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the poem is really nice just a correction if you can make in 2nd stanza line 4 where it can be end shed with blood other than that the poem is really superb Toying with tense, |
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humanity calls
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the poem is really nice just a correction if you can make in 2nd stanza line 4 where it can be end shed with blood other than that the poem is really superb Thank you, but no, I wrote it that way, thank you for reading though |
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humanity calls
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Nice thank you for sharing. Thanks Tazz, |
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