Topic: ~ like honey
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Tue 08/07/12 06:45 PM
you move ahead
i'll linger
stripped down
in my thoughts
i struggle
to dress oh-so-pretty
sweet songbird
sings the saddest song
i cry
listening to the mad poet
i'll linger
like honey
smeared into the corners

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Tue 08/07/12 08:47 PM
Gorgeous write tb..

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Wed 08/08/12 06:00 AM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Wed 08/08/12 06:06 PM
"stripped down in my thoughts "

Awesome write.....flowerforyou smokin

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Wed 08/08/12 08:06 PM
Ainjel....thankyou soo much!

tazztops...flowerforyou

Up2Us...you are sweet...

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Thu 08/09/12 03:23 PM
love this teasingb! flowerforyou

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Fri 08/10/12 06:14 AM
bastet126... great to read for me,what you wrote,thankyou.

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Fri 08/10/12 02:12 PM
This poem is captivating.

"like honey
smeared into the corners"

I really love this line. I love this piece.

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Fri 08/10/12 03:21 PM
it is great to read, i am a fan of your mine.

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Fri 08/10/12 06:20 PM
plastic_pancakes....blush..

poppashroom...blushing...