Topic: The Quest Part One And Two | |
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There came a day
my Queen sent for me when I recieved her call I came with all Godspeed Standing in her presence I then kneeled on one knee I asked my Queen how may I serve thee She said rise Sir Daniel oh how I love thee you are my last Knight and you mean everything to me I have something to ask of you this is not an order, but a request I ask you to go on a dangerous quest I said, my Queen there is no danger to great just speak the word and I will make hast She said, oh Daniel I hate to ask this of you because all the other Knight are gone I don't want to lose you too I said, My Queen here I stand you know that whatever you wish will be my command With love, honor and bravery I serve you my Queen you know that I am here to fulfill your every need With her head hung low and tears in her eyes from her throne slowly she began to rise She walked over to me and softly touched my lips teacing them so gently with her finger tips She then softly spoke with a quivering voice I didn't want to ask you this Daniel but I have no other choice There is a talisman a golden flower it's said to possess magical powers With this flower I could heal this land and a never ending peace would always stand By Daniel 05/08/08 Part One To be continued The Quest Part Two For a few moments silence filled the air upon my Queens face was a blank stare I then asked, Tell me my Queen where is this flower the one you say possesses this magical power And why my Queen do you fear that I may never return to you here She said, Oh my dear Daniel this story I will tell you because I know that in your heart to me you are true You brothers in arms all of the other Knights they all took this journey and each of them died That's why it grieves my heart to ask you this because if anything happened to you you would be sorely missed The story goes as it was told to me this magical flower was created from the beginning of eternity It's a puzzle shrouded in mystery very few have ever lived long enough to tell of it's history Once you get past our enemies and make it to this place there is a door you will see that has a lions face Touch the nose of the lion and turn it to the right wait a few moments and you will be inside Once you get inside you will come to a rift a place where space and time doesn't exist There will be a great creature that guards this flower one that has lived through the ages one of immense power You must head north Daniel you will travel through enemy land that's why this is so dangerous Daniel I hope you understand But the needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few and now I fear I must ask this of you Remember this only a heart that's pure can grasp it in their hand for if there is any evil in you you will die where you stand But I know you daniel your heart is full of love you are one of Gods gifts sent from heaven above You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive By Daniel 05/09/08 To be continued.. |
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Hey if you need help in fetching that flower my friend, here is one Wolf Warrior that will stand with you. That was a great epic Daniel. I look forward to the rest.
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Sun 05/11/08 07:17 AM
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Thanks Cy,.. And robert I will keep that in mind, you have given me an idea for when I write the next part.. I believe I will write you in the story.. thanks for the inspiration
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Great read from a great write.
With a poem like that, I would have to agree with the Queen and say you have the best chance to survive. "You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive" Pen > Sword |
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For any servant of a throne.
Your the knight to GET-ER-DONE! wink,lol You know me always a thought to make a grin,lol.. Very nice poems Daniel...And im sure your flower will be found.. |
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Great read from a great write. With a poem like that, I would have to agree with the Queen and say you have the best chance to survive. "You are not physically my strongest Knight but you are cunning and wise I believe that out of all the other Knights you have the best chance to survive" Pen > Sword Thanks d4tc, glad you liked it, I should have part three done sometime today or this evening.. it make me happy that people appreciate my work.. And Terry, yes you brought a grin to my face and a chuckle.. Thank you my friend.. |
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always a pleasure Daniel
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Your so sweet "Sir Daniel"!!! |
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(((((Pam))))) (((((Noden)))))
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