Topic: The Quest Part One And Two
2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/10/08 03:07 AM
There came a day
my Queen sent for me
when I recieved her call
I came with all Godspeed

Standing in her presence
I then kneeled on one knee
I asked my Queen
how may I serve thee

She said rise Sir Daniel
oh how I love thee
you are my last Knight
and you mean everything to me

I have something to ask of you
this is not an order, but a request
I ask you to go
on a dangerous quest

I said, my Queen
there is no danger to great
just speak the word
and I will make hast

She said, oh Daniel
I hate to ask this of you
because all the other Knight are gone
I don't want to lose you too

I said, My Queen
here I stand
you know that whatever you wish
will be my command

With love, honor and bravery
I serve you my Queen
you know that I am here to fulfill
your every need

With her head hung low
and tears in her eyes
from her throne slowly
she began to rise

She walked over to me
and softly touched my lips
teacing them so gently
with her finger tips

She then softly spoke
with a quivering voice
I didn't want to ask you this Daniel
but I have no other choice

There is a talisman
a golden flower
it's said to possess
magical powers

With this flower
I could heal this land
and a never ending peace
would always stand

By Daniel
05/08/08

Part One
To be continued

The Quest Part Two

For a few moments
silence filled the air
upon my Queens face
was a blank stare

I then asked, Tell me my Queen
where is this flower
the one you say possesses
this magical power

And why my Queen
do you fear
that I may never
return to you here

She said, Oh my dear Daniel
this story I will tell you
because I know that in your heart
to me you are true

You brothers in arms
all of the other Knights
they all took this journey
and each of them died

That's why it grieves my heart
to ask you this
because if anything happened to you
you would be sorely missed

The story goes
as it was told to me
this magical flower was created
from the beginning of eternity

It's a puzzle
shrouded in mystery
very few have ever lived long enough
to tell of it's history

Once you get past our enemies
and make it to this place
there is a door you will see
that has a lions face

Touch the nose of the lion
and turn it to the right
wait a few moments
and you will be inside

Once you get inside
you will come to a rift
a place where space and time
doesn't exist

There will be a great creature
that guards this flower
one that has lived through the ages
one of immense power

You must head north Daniel
you will travel through enemy land
that's why this is so dangerous Daniel
I hope you understand

But the needs of the many
out weigh the needs of the few
and now I fear
I must ask this of you

Remember this
only a heart that's pure
can grasp it in their hand
for if there is any evil in you
you will die where you stand

But I know you daniel
your heart is full of love
you are one of Gods gifts
sent from heaven above

You are not physically my strongest Knight
but you are cunning and wise
I believe that out of all the other Knights
you have the best chance to survive

By Daniel
05/09/08

To be continued..


Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 05/10/08 01:16 PM
Hey if you need help in fetching that flower my friend, here is one Wolf Warrior that will stand with you. That was a great epic Daniel. I look forward to the rest.

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Sat 05/10/08 05:24 PM
drinker :smile: drinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/11/08 06:36 AM
Edited by 2Btrue2One on Sun 05/11/08 07:17 AM
Thanks Cy,.. And robert I will keep that in mind, you have given me an idea for when I write the next part.. I believe I will write you in the story.. thanks for the inspiration

d4tc's photo
Sun 05/11/08 08:08 AM
Great read from a great write. bigsmile

With a poem like that, I would have to agree with the Queen and say you have the best chance to survive.

"You are not physically my strongest Knight
but you are cunning and wise
I believe that out of all the other Knights
you have the best chance to survive"

Pen > Sword :wink:

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Sun 05/11/08 08:14 AM
:heart: For any servant of a throne.
Your the knight to GET-ER-DONE! wink,lol

You know me always a thought to make a grin,lol..

Very nice poems Daniel...And im sure your flower will be found..

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/11/08 08:26 AM

Great read from a great write. bigsmile

With a poem like that, I would have to agree with the Queen and say you have the best chance to survive.

"You are not physically my strongest Knight
but you are cunning and wise
I believe that out of all the other Knights
you have the best chance to survive"

Pen > Sword :wink:



Thanks d4tc, glad you liked it, I should have part three done sometime today or this evening.. it make me happy that people appreciate my work..drinker

And Terry, yes you brought a grin to my face and a chuckle.. Thank you my friend..drinker

pkh's photo
Sun 05/11/08 12:20 PM
flowerforyou always a pleasure Daniel

Noden's photo
Sun 05/11/08 06:23 PM
smooched bigsmile

Your so sweet "Sir Daniel"!!!

2Btrue2One's photo
Mon 05/12/08 12:59 AM
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