Hi,

Well, I have just finished my profile, but i don't really think it is right.

This is the first time that I have actually created a profile for a dating site. (The comment about disliking these things is more for the having to write a blurb about myself if as few words as possible.)

I could really do with some constructive criticism to help me improve my post.
I have read some of the other comments posted in this section and tried to add some of those suggestions to my post.

So, anybody have some good advice?

Cheers

Chris.