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Hi,
Well, I have just finished my profile, but i don't really think it is right. This is the first time that I have actually created a profile for a dating site. (The comment about disliking these things is more for the having to write a blurb about myself if as few words as possible.) I could really do with some constructive criticism to help me improve my post. I have read some of the other comments posted in this section and tried to add some of those suggestions to my post. So, anybody have some good advice? Cheers Chris. |
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**you need pictures. more than 1, to start with.
Well I really hate these things... oh well here goes! **get rid of this I'm a 30 year old Brit who moved to Geneva three years ago with work. I enjoy reading, films, music, cooking and cycling. I go to the gym a few times a week to try to keep fit. I like to think that i'm intelligent, reliable, modest, dependable and have a good, if somewhat dark, sense of humor. **cut out i like to think--you either know of you don't--confidence is sexy I'm looking for someone with a good sense of humor (aren't we all), who enjoys some of the same like as myself. **pretty scant here, I wouldn't have what you have in parenthesis, but that's your choice, it's your profile. welcome and good luck |
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Hi, Well, I have just finished my profile, but i don't really think it is right. This is the first time that I have actually created a profile for a dating site. (The comment about disliking these things is more for the having to write a blurb about myself if as few words as possible.) I could really do with some constructive criticism to help me improve my post. I have read some of the other comments posted in this section and tried to add some of those suggestions to my post. So, anybody have some good advice? Cheers Chris. i like it, its honest, and to the point, no point putting your whole life story there, otherwise there is no point making contact and getting to know you. thats my opinion anyway, wish you all the best.. |
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