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Fri 08/27/10 09:18 PM

Simple and free

Like a ship at sea

Telling me you love me

Down on bended knee

Like the birds in the sky

I feel like I’m high

We laugh and we cry

Never telling each other lies

When you hold me tight

It always feels right

And in the darkest night

You make everything bright

You hold the key

Just the way it should be

God gave you to me

Simple And Free




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Fri 08/27/10 08:52 PM
I can totally relate to your poem. I never thought that I could feel a deep longing, as I have for someone that does not even know that I feel this way. And this is what I wrote about this person.

My Crush

You caught my eye

Just as I walked by

Not giving a thought

While I was distraught

Without a clue

My crush would be you

How silly of me

To try and see

What it would be like

Going on a hike

Maybe a walk

Having a nice long talk

Holding your hand

Writing names in the sand

Laughing and crying

All the time I’m just sighing

Because you don’t know

Your crush is a stone’s throw

I hope you will look my way

Or think of things to say

But all the while

I look at you and smile

I wish you felt

This spark that makes me melt

I wish you knew

My feelings for you

I’m oh so near

But it’s often clear

My dream to be with you

Will never come true.




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Fri 08/27/10 08:36 PM
Edited by treasurefind on Fri 08/27/10 08:44 PM
http://musicouch.com/musicouching/music-18/


I wrote this poem and added the video with it.

I also did write the article about Rod Piazza and the Mighty Flyers, but I am sorry to see that it was removed.



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Fri 08/27/10 08:01 PM
Be sure and go to the second page. That is where you will be able to play the video. :-)

http://musicouch.com/instruments/blues-for-you-to-hear/

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Fri 08/27/10 07:51 PM
Very heartfelt words.