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Across these seas to kneel fast to my knees,
With your hand in mine both feeling so devine Looking up into you eyes I softly start to speak As a small tear flows down your bronzed tan cheek I whisper so softly, would you let me be your man Sliping the ring down your finger, your solid gold band Tears rushing now like falling rain from the sky You place your hands upon my face, as we both start to cry And you say back to me softly. yes, until the day that we die. We fall together arms wrapping each other close and tight. Our lips come together both knowing now, everythings alright. This was inspired for two of the most beautiful people on This site, who have made their plans to be together for all of their lives. Although thousands of miles apart They have met here and soon will be, in this poem above. I love them both dearly, and THIS is my gift to THEM. TR.2008 |
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Very beautifully written
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Wonderful gift Terry
Thank you for sharing it with us! |
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Awesome write T.
Thanks Bro. |
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Terry.... you are such a softie....
and thankyou... |
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( kicking the dirt beneath my feet) And I thought I was the most beautiful person on this site.
Great words T, once again you bring joy to these pages of JSH. G |
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say terry--didn't know you write poem--this is really good--
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EXCELLENT TRIBUTE
Across these seas to kneel fast to my knees, With your hand in mine both feeling so devine Looking up into you eyes I softly start to speak As a small tear flows down your bronzed tan cheek I whisper so softly, would you let me be your man Sliping the ring down your finger, your solid gold band Tears rushing now like falling rain from the sky You place your hands upon my face, as we both start to cry And you say back to me softly. yes, until the day that we die. We fall together arms wrapping each other close and tight. Our lips come together both knowing now, everythings alright. This was inspired for two of the most beautiful people on This site, who have made their plans to be together for all of their lives. Although thousands of miles apart They have met here and soon will be, in this poem above. I love them both dearly, and THIS is my gift to THEM. TR.2008 |
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Thank you all for reading this and your nice replies.
When coming to Just Say Hi, many people on here became my friends. And Karma, and son,lol were two of the friends who talked with me daily, and Jess was the p.m. friend and BOTH showed me THEY were REAL and sincere people. So WE became good friends. Through BOTH I have learned them, and THEY have taught me ALOT through reading their words on these pages. BOTH having no-end to their own EACH, creatitivity, and poem writtings....And as a person EACH, they have all the qualities that make up,,GREAT PEOPLE and FRIENDS.. I WISH THEM BOTH ALL THAT LIFE CAN BE FELT WITH THEM TOGETHER. LONG LIFE, LONG LOVE, AND A NEVER ENDING HAPPINESS... And To Mr.G, man (sorry), lol I know you were joking but I did kind of NOT say my words right in its dedication....lol THERE ARE MANY BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE ON THIS SITE, and MY FRIENDS, OUR ALL JUST SOME OF THEM,LOL I HOPE that LOVE finds EACH of YOU as IT has found THESE TWO GREAT FOLKS HERE,,,,JESS642...and,, Karmafury.... |
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beautiful tribute wish them all the best
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beautiful tribute wish them all the best |
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I suspect this will be a very interesting journey for both of us... Enough differences to never tire of each other... enough similarities to give this thing reality, and strength, and resilience... With less than three weeks to go, until Karma arrives.... whoo hoo...what a ride this is going to be!!! |
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I suspect this will be a very interesting journey for both of us... Enough differences to never tire of each other... enough similarities to give this thing reality, and strength, and resilience... With less than three weeks to go, until Karma arrives.... whoo hoo...what a ride this is going to be!!! YOU have a gift of spirit and so does KARMA...so WHEN you both do embrace..........LOOK-OUT as you both will be spellbound by the other,,,,,,AND "THAT" IS SO DAMM COOL!!!!!! Jess you know I have never been one to B/S I Think you and Karma ARE the wonder of LOVE'S MATCH,,,,and the GLORY of this place finding BOTH OF YOU,,,,,WITH "LOVE". I TRULLY WISH,,,,I COULD BE THERE FOR ALL THE PHOTO'S OF YOUR FIRST SEEING AND FEELING OF WHAT YOU BOTH HAVE BEEN LOOKING FORWARD TO....LOVE and the BOTH of YOU,,,,lolOK,,,IM DONE NOW,lol. |
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very sweet---
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