Topic: Write A Poem About Oranges!
James1234567's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:20 PM

how about beans.....

beans, beans , good for your heart,
the more you eat them the more you fart

FroznChild's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:20 PM

Oranges

Oh, those tiny little pumpkin wannabes.
Stuck up like tangerines on a tree.
Can't blush like the apples can do.
Sometimes green or sour for you.


and this one simply rocked... great write as well!

elsathebloody's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:21 PM
Orange, a color,
And orange is a sweet fruit,
But which do you mean?

elsathebloody's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:22 PM


how about beans.....

beans, beans , good for your heart,
the more you eat them the more you fart


Beans are the worst of
enemies to the orange,
But not to taco.

Runpenzo's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:24 PM
Edited by Runpenzo on Fri 03/21/08 04:26 PM
A rhyme for orange I seeks,
My brain strains and leeks,
Stuipd old word,
I'll go kick a small bird,
Then I'll go blame it on Pete!

James1234567's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:25 PM




tacos are good, all this talk about food is making me hungry

Runpenzo's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:30 PM
I would like an orange flavored pie,
If I had one I'd surely just die,
All other food,
Not being as good,
Would make me just want to fry!

elsathebloody's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:34 PM

I would like an orange flavored pie,
If I had one I'd surely just die,
All other food,
Not being as good,
Would make me just want to fry!



You write expertly,
On orange preference and taste.
Hippopotamus.

BonnyMiss's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:46 PM
An apple a day keeps the doctor away
Good remedy for keeping ails at bay
Bananas good for iron and vigor
and really not so good for your figure
Grapes,made into wine and fortified
A tall glass and you're satisfied
Lemons added to rum for a cure
Drink it once and you'll want some more
A squeeze of tangerines to add some zest
Children love this one the best
Now,here in front of you is the truth
Oranges aren't the only fruit

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 03/21/08 04:51 PM
“Anticipation”

Oh your so nice plump and round.
Its hard for me to put you down.
As I take in your texture.
I just can’t wait to endure.
Your sweet taste.
Not one morsel will I waste.
Slowly as I begin to peel.
Each piece or your outer surface back.
Thinking of this delicious snack.
Pulling apart each individual piece.
My anticipation starts to increase.
As my lips touch your smooth skin.
To my face it brings a grin.
Licking my lips as I plunge.
Into eating my orange.

K.L.M
3/21/2008

FroznChild's photo
Fri 03/21/08 05:32 PM

“Anticipation”

K.L.M
3/21/2008


lol... cute cute cute.

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 03/21/08 06:06 PM

Orange is a color, an attitude, a feeling
Orange can send your retinas reeling
Orange is a taste that has no equal
If orange was a movie, I'd go see the sequal
I have orange shirts, a coat, and a car
So women tend to veiw me from afar
But still I love orange to the bone
Though I sometimes resemble a traffic cone
Orange is the pinnacle of the colors and flavors
If orange was a person, it'd do you a favor
Orange makes you happy and physically fit
But it will drive you nuts if you try rhyming it.


LMAO! THis is perfect! I will hae to give some thought to the sweet orance before I put words to it.

FroznChild's photo
Fri 03/21/08 10:54 PM

An apple a day keeps the doctor away
Good remedy for keeping ails at bay
Bananas good for iron and vigor
and really not so good for your figure
Grapes,made into wine and fortified
A tall glass and you're satisfied
Lemons added to rum for a cure
Drink it once and you'll want some more
A squeeze of tangerines to add some zest
Children love this one the best
Now,here in front of you is the truth
Oranges aren't the only fruit

BonnyMiss... way to hit the mark. Loved this one as well.
Very good!

BonnyMiss's photo
Fri 03/21/08 11:53 PM
Why thank you sir that was so kind.
Do we respond here in rhyme?

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/22/08 09:58 AM
It grows so golden on a tree.
It tastes like sunshine to me.
If you eat or drink it up.
It supposed to be good stuff.
Chase away a cold and other things too.
Its oranges...Who knew?
:wink:

Teddy 03-22-08

krunkadelicflex's photo
Sat 03/22/08 10:33 AM
An orange is nature's sunshine
When ripe it's very sweet
Will tantlize your taste buds
And set you on your feet
It has a vibrant color
Of red and yellow mixed
So eat an orange often
To keep your body fixed

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/22/08 10:47 AM
Round and sweet full of flavor
My mouth waters your taste it savours
Squeezed for juice minus the seeds
Your nourishment is what my body needs
Peeled and pulled in segments too
Your sweet pulp I will chew
Mom mixed you with castor oil
That rotten germ we did foil
Mixed with others or left alone
Dear sweet orange you're all gone

ZPicante's photo
Sat 03/22/08 10:48 AM
Brilliant! Brilliant, I say!

I, too, loved this one:


Orange is a color, an attitude, a feeling
Orange can send your retinas reeling
Orange is a taste that has no equal
If orange was a movie, I'd go see the sequal
I have orange shirts, a coat, and a car
So women tend to veiw me from afar
But still I love orange to the bone
Though I sometimes resemble a traffic cone
Orange is the pinnacle of the colors and flavors
If orange was a person, it'd do you a favor
Orange makes you happy and physically fit
But it will drive you nuts if you try rhyming it.


Well done! Very clever.

An orange is difficult to peel
using your hands, without a knife
to break its hearty, armadillo skin
and its tender flesh reveal.

(Yeah, that's all I've got, pathetically. :smile: )



lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 03/22/08 10:52 AM
Z, this thread is wonderful! You have made us all think and work for it! Thanks!


You are truely orange
Bright like the sun
You shine and bring brightness
To a sometimes bleak world
You make us work
And give us hope

For you Zflowerforyou flowerforyou

ZPicante's photo
Sat 03/22/08 12:49 PM
Thanks, m'dear lurchs_sister! Lovely! happy