Topic: The Last Suicide
FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/02/08 07:47 PM
The Last Suicide

Perhaps if I wonder,
What casts my thoughts asunder,
I would choose not to rest where I stay.
For even the slightest mention,
Of my Evil intention,
Turns patrons of salvation quickly my way.
To my door they shall run,
Once they learn I've become,
And abomination of the very worst kind.
Screams will echo down the street,
Screams I'm sure I'm soon to meet,
I can see now, that my eyes are no longer blind.
But on closer consternation,
They scream a lying proclamation,
That tells me no-one want me anymore...
So with that I take my knife,
And I quickly cut my life,
My blood pours like wine upon the floor.
As my life now ebbs away,
I have one last thought to say,
Because the lives we live, shine, just like mirrors.
And in the end I was still blind,
To the ones who liked my mind.
Now I'm flooded to the brim with bitter tears.
But it's already to late,
For I fear I've sealed my fate.
So I let escape a lonely, tired sigh.
And as my body grows cold,
The reaper grows more bold.
Till finally, all to suddenly, I die.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

pkh's photo
Sun 03/02/08 07:54 PM
very powerful,but nothing is ever to lateflowerforyou

Enya's photo
Sun 03/02/08 07:58 PM
huh is this a personal poem?huh

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 03/02/08 08:04 PM
Please tell me this is just a poem....

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:36 PM
woah woah woah... of course it's just a poem.
(It's against the rules to post anything real like that)

Personally, I hope that it stems the tide towards anyone else who would do such a thing, and wake them to how good life is...
(Thanks for the concern though)

Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild

Jess642's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:42 PM
Awesome!!! I have been reading your work as it appears here...

I love the beat, and the tempo of your work, the natural flow, and the way you weave your words...

I enjoy the dark, as well as the light, for life is all the shades as well..

Thankyou.flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/02/08 11:59 PM

Awesome!!! I have been reading your work as it appears here...

I love the beat, and the tempo of your work, the natural flow, and the way you weave your words...

I enjoy the dark, as well as the light, for life is all the shades as well..

Thankyou.flowerforyou

wow... you really flatter me. Thank you for taking notice!
Hope that I can continue to please all.
I mean... shucks... lol