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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Wed 02/27/08 12:01 PM
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I would wake you with a longing kiss
This man is you who I can no longer resist Let my hair hang over your chest As I love you thru the night, slowly, wanting it to never end Fall into me my love, I will show you the paradise you have been looking for My whole self trembling with every touch The need in your eyes is plain to see As we become one let me show you how I feel My heart will always be true The memories of the past no longer here They have gone away revealing the light of a new sun Hiding behind the depths of the eyes of this man who I now think I love Fall into me, love me 'til the end of time Fall into me, just as if the world around us mattered no more Run away with me to the paradise waiting beyond the horizon And I will show the sweetest love you've never found Fall into me my love, because I think I have fallen into you. Marina S.A.B |
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hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend!
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very pretty
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man that last line should say "Fallen into you" much more powerful statement. I love everything else though!
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hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend! |
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man that last line should say "Fallen into you" much more powerful statement. I love everything else though! Advise taken! You are right, sounds better that way, thanks, very much |
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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Wed 02/27/08 12:03 PM
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hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend! Wait a minute! Nobody eats anybody here! |
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SO BEAUTIFUL
SOUNDS LIKE REAL LOVE |
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you need to get these published!
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very pretty Thanks Dottie |
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hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend! |
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SO BEAUTIFUL SOUNDS LIKE REAL LOVE {{{{Sighing}}}} Sure hope so....... |
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you need to get these published! Think so? Thank you. |
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hmm, now I'm hungry, and really wishing I had a boyfriend! Behave Otterman! |
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Thanks MsTeddy.
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Marina, gotta say that is your best so far, I was truly touched by it. You have true talent from within my dear..
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Simply beautiful
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beautiful
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Thanks Daniel, can't express enough how much I appreciate you being a friend to me
Rockermom, thanks so much Pkh, |
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