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Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/27/08 07:25 AM
Untitled My love you may not know it, I heard your heart in tears, That's why I held you close to me And scared away your fears. Oh now please don't wonder Why I love you so, Just let us stay together With these feelings that we show. Hush my darlin, kiss these lips And don't you worry why. I am here for you right now, For you called me with your sigh. The morning's light is calling Yet here we lay so close, Yes my dear, we're stalling Because I love you most. Fadedspirit 2/26/2008

countrybumpkin2u Joined Thu 02/21/08 Posts: 1238	Wed 02/27/08 07:26 AM
BRAVO

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/27/08 07:27 AM
beautiful

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/27/08 07:40 AM
awww, thanks countrybumkin and pkh.

pms64 Joined Thu 09/14/06 Posts: 1143	Wed 02/27/08 07:58 AM
AWWWW, That was beautiful.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/27/08 08:10 AM
So Very Beautiful

lizethmarina Joined Thu 12/20/07 Posts: 229	Wed 02/27/08 09:18 AM
Very, very beautiful

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/27/08 09:34 AM
Awww....y'all are gonna make me blush. Thanks for your "beautiful" comments.

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Wed 02/27/08 12:14 PM


klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Wed 02/27/08 04:26 PM
Good one...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/27/08 05:56 PM


Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 02/28/08 05:48 PM
Thanks shauna, klugman, and MsTeddyBear.

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