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Edited by
lizethmarina
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Tue 02/26/08 11:41 AM
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No more words, let me lose myself in the depths of your eyes
No more words, let your body tell me all your lips no longer can No more words, turn off the light, lay next to me, hold me until the next morn light No more words, thaw the ice, melt the snow, fill it with the pasion of a burning love No more tears, they have faded, wiped away by your soft hands No more lies to myself thinking I would never find anything true again No more doubts, they were blown by the wind after our first kiss Sweet first kiss, revealing what's next for you and me. Could it be a lifetime of love, sharing, companionship? Or just a moment of passion, guarded by a blanket of repent No more thoughts, no more words, no more doubts It's you who I want to give myself to After your promise made that you will only be mine Can I tell you, I could be yours until the light fades from the sun. Marina. S.A.B. |
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touching
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Interesting write. I enjoyed it.
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Mirror,
Shaden, Timmy, glad you enjoyed it MsTeddy to you! |
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Very Nice |
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Man!!! It just gets better and better with you!!
I am a HUGE fan!! |
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Thanks Mom
Country, girl i am a fan of yours too! |
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once agian your heart shows
nice write |
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Awwwww, thanks KC, you are always so sweet to me
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Edited by
love2loveu
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Tue 02/26/08 10:36 PM
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Girl, your writing is so deep. Your writing is beautiful. I'm a writer myself, have been so for a very long time and when you see that quality of work through someone else's writing, then you know you're good. let that ink flow girl, you have a great gift!!!!!!!
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*applause*
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Very nice.
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very nice
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Awww, thanks love2, do you post your poems here? I would love to read some of your work. Thanks for your words and as long as there is MS word, blank sheets of paper and ink, i'll keep writing
storm, bowing, thank you faded, always good vibes. phk, thanks. |
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