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Edited by
timmyschillin
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Tue 02/26/08 11:45 AM
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I'm in a daze and my thoughts simmer
Head's all blimpy and I don't care Saw my baby down by the river Knew she'd have to come up soon for air Sweet Sherry come on under the covers We can have high times if you'll abide We can discover the wonders of nature Rolling in the rushes down by the riverside when I touch you I feel happy inside It's such a feeling that I cannot hide through thick and thin and boiling the tides you light my wick and I burn inside when things are bleak from dawn to dusk its only you that I choose to trust its only your love I'll take if I must its sweet surrender when it's just us If you only knew how far I'm falling just to satisfy a warm cry calling you'd see a little tiny infant newt wearing his soul as a bowl of fruit As an apple from high up atop It's just me, a lonely rain drop Head over heels and right on cue I think I'm falling in love with you |
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Nice write!
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Thanks Ms Teddy!
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Sooooo sweet! Loved it!
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good write tim
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Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Wrote this one on V-Day. I should start writing for hallmark, bwahah.. Ya right. :)
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ok so I recognize the first one.....The Greatful Dead "sugar magnolia" but what is the second one????
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Yea, there's a reference to the Grateful Dead and the Beatles. :]
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its driving me crazy what song??
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when I touch you I feel happy inside It's such a feeling that I cannot hide im not a dead-head but thats from "I wanna hold ur hand" |
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My boss is a dead head. 70 shows under his belt, and crazy mentality to go along with it.
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OMG!!! Your gonna make me fall in love with you!!
CALM DOWM....JK Great write |
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haha thanks... I'm glad u liked it! :)
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