Topic: A Farewell Of Sorts | |
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In bluest skies I see your eyes
And in the children your heart. The warmth of fire, Your passion's desire, While feeling the flames You hold no blame, For this is the sting of love. The wind that sweeps in summer's heat, Your voice thus sweeps my mind complete, Within your sultry tone. Wherever you may And tend to stay I bid you a fair adieu. Forever my friend we'll never end For I gave a song to you. Wherever you go, please go in peace And take upon you a new life's lease, For that is my wish for you. Fadedspirit 2/20/2008 |
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Awwwwwww thats sweet...
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awww good one
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what a nice tribute to a friend
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Thanks MsTeddyBear, TxsGal, and bgeorge.
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very good write
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aww that was sweet
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nice
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I love this one! The rhythm is filled with great transitions and these words are such a beautiful sentiment. This is truly a great work!
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Thanks robertsonm30, pkh, LAMom, shauna, and ponchopollito.
Nice to see ya back ronin and thanks for your comment. |
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